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for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

by FaTaLfURy

person MelMuff
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That is so SSSSSSSSAAAAAAAAAAAAADDDDDDDDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cries hysterically* WWWWWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Kagome and the baby have to live. They just have to. NNNNNOOOOOO!!!!!! This can't happened. Geesh! I can't wait for the next chap. I hope it will be up soon.
person MegaBorX
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG so sad but so good, please hurry as fast as you can on this one...... and i have a very high hope on this one ill email it too you..... please hurry and finish. Arigato for my early selfish attitude i shouldve never doubted your intentions.

Great angsty chappie, just make sure this isnt the end
person Inuzands
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This chapter was so good! Oh, the drama. I'm glad that so far most everyone is alive, even Kouga and Ayame (didn't see that coming). I will trust in you, our fearless leader, to bring us another chapter soon that will hopefully be just a wee bit happier? Please? Good work, keep it up!! That's all I have to say. :)
person LadySilverwings
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sad? Sad?! That's like morbidly depressing! Soul-shattering anguish!!! Kagome! And the baby! WAAAHHH!!! You better not just leave it at that too! Or I'll invoke the spirits of ever-lasting writer's block to hunt you down! ----> I'm so addicted to this story.... <----
person Ickabod119
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well Lets see if i can make up for all the chapters I missed. The Interaction Between Inuyasha & Sesshomaru is priceless I especially like the part were Inuyasha calls him Fluffy it is just to prefect and it suits. it is also a awesome Insult sorta like how Sesshomaru says Half Breed and Little Brother. Having Kagome Become pregnant was a good twist. I was worried about Inuyasha, Mood Swings and Kagome equal a scary situation for a loud mouth short tempered hanyou ^_^. I was totally laughing about the about the cravings Rocky Road Ice Cream yet she never did like Rocky Road Ice Cream to begin with. Souta reaction was really cool to. I was surprised that Inuyasha didn't like go all demon when he learned that his mate was gone and nobody knew were but I also think you made him more mature and that is one of the things about this story that is awesome a wiser Inuyasha. Now we are at the parte I e I need my Kleenex, I hope your happy with yourself you drove a grow man to tears with that last chapter. I know I asked you for more angst but this was too much. I could actually hear Inuyasha Howl and it absolutely pierced my heart. Well in closing once again you make me laugh with your writing but then at the same time I want to cry, your writing is that good. You can convey emontions so well I a I am going to be sorry once this ends. I wil try to review the rest but I do have one request and that is that you continue to bless us with your wonderful writing style and gorgeous words.

P.S. Update Soon I don't think I can take the suspense. I hope Kagome & Iuyasha Have a happry ending.

Your Friend,
Ickabod
person Stefanie
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! Poor Inuyasha. Poor Kagome. I think Inuyasha is gonna be hard to control after this. Also I wanted to say how cool it is that you answer the questions to all the people that review. Its like having a penpal. lol I look forward to it ^_^. Update soon plz...i cant wait to see how Inuyasha in gonna handle this situtation. And dont worry. Ill be around to read another one of your stories ^_~ How could I stay away?
person Nina
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the last two chapter. Awesome fight scenes. I don't even know where to begin in praising you for such a gripping, action-packed sequence of events. From Kikyo luring Kagome away with lies to Inuyasha howling his grief for Kagome and EVERYTHING in between. All I can say is an outsoutstanding job you have done so far throughout this fic. There are alot of very good writers out there, but you truly are one of the TOP authors that I have read and I read a whole lot of fics, and not just Inuyasha. I can honestly say, in my opinion, that there are probably a dozen true writers with professional talent writing fanfictions. That includes Mediaminer, Fanfiction, Adultfiction and all the other little websites I've found with fics. You, I feel, are in the top THREE. I want you to always keep my email address so when you write your first novel, you'll let me know so I can go out and buy it!!!!

I was going to save these comments for when the story ended, but I just couldn't wait. You totally floor me and as always ROCK MY WORLD.

Can't wait for the rest. HUGS AND KISSES!!!!!
person Kellie
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You really like to leave us hanging, don't you? Great chapter and I can't wait to read the next chapter
person Stefanie
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I tried to leave feedback yesterday for you...but the server wouldnt let me. Kept saying to many people were online. Oh well. Just know I did try. I sure hope this one gets through. I hope Inuyasha turns on Kikyou and kills her real dead. Kikyou really sucks lol. OK enough bashing of Kikyou. This last chapter was a tear jerker. I sure hope you still have a happy ending in mind. But I promise I won't be mad or hate you if you decide to make it a angsty ending. This story rocks either way. Im glad its coming to an end ( i like closure lol ) but Im also enjoying this story so much it's sad to see it end. Anyways, enough of my babbling. Update soon plz!
person Kathie
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*transforms back to a human* Wow that chapter must be my Tetsusaiga >.< hehe. Anyway its another good story. Are you sure no one is writing it for you *winks* just playing. But anyway i have to wait for another chapter to come out *sighs*. Since i read this page i might not transform. Thats a good thing for you ^.^, well can you email me if you write like 3 more chapters or even finish the story, cause i kinda hate to wait. Hehe sorry, but anyway i might usually visit this webpage just to check out some other stories. gotta go bye ^.^