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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story...I rarely review a s onl online...but this one is AWESOME! Please update soon. The suspense is killing me!
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April 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::cries::NOOOOOOO! Is she really dead? Is she is she is she???!!! It cant be possible ::sniffle:: Its all so sad! (Although i did like thro/Sro/Sango parts xDD ) ooo! You HAVE!!!!!!!! to update soon or im gonna like...blow up or something! This is tooo good!
amicalement!
mi-chan ^^
amicalement!
mi-chan ^^
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAAAAHHHHH! Iwipiwiping tears right now! Y.Y *Sniff* Not Kagome, NOOOOOOO! PLEASE tell me Inu's going to use the Shikon no Tama to bring her back, PLEASE...I just wanna crymuchmuch right now...As for your question, I'd love to be your beta...but I've never beta'd before, and I'm not sure how msn will handle it. No matter, though, if you ever need a tip or someone to bounce an idea off of...*winks, then glances at last line and breaks down into sobs* "Kagome, no!"
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay! Here's what I'm gonna guess what will happen. Either Sessy will use Tensaiga to bring her back or somehow Inu Yasha will get the Shikon jewel, fused back together, and wish for her to come back. I don't know about their child. I think that can honestly go either way. He/She can either be brought back or not. Maybe Kagome and the child are in some sort of state that their on the brink of death and can actually live. By the way, did Inu Yasha cut off Kagome's arm or just cut it deeply? I was a bit confused when I read something in one of the 2 chaps. Anyway, maybe using Tensaiga or the Shikon jewel are to easy and she won't be brought back. Maybe Inu Yasha will destroy Naraku, thus getting his revenge, and then kill himself to be with his mate. That's the other thing I envision. Or maybe this is one big bad dream that Inu Yasha will wake up from but I doubt it. I don't bloody think that will happen. Anyway, I hope the next chap will come out real soon and I can't wait for more. This is such a great suspenseful fic. And I'd be surprised if one of my theories were correct too.
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to add that this is my #1 Inu Yasha fanfic now and thanx for dishing out those kleenaxes. I really needed one when I started to cry. Keep up the good work! I'm addicted to your fanfic and I'm hungry for more. RIGHT NOW!!! LOL
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT WAS THAT????????!!!!!! i totally felt bad.. my little tear fall from my eye... it was an awesome chappy!!! i was soooo good!!! the hole drama thing.. the anguish(thats right written?) you hav upd update soioooon.. my ony happiness are your ùpdates.. (thats the only thing i can do.. i'm in bed sick T-T) update!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh No! Please tell me you didn't kill Kagome!! Man, talk about your emotionally charged chapter. I hope that it turns out okay, but what about the child? If Kagome loses the baby I don't see how she would deal with that. It could either tear her & Inu apart or bring them together so that he doesn't go with Kikyo. I'm glad I inspired you toi write another story, I like your writing. Will it be Inu&Kag(I hope) or another couple? Maybe it could be one were she starts seeing othe people w/o telling Inu. Could you imagine his reaction?
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniff**sniff* Ok forget it... *bawl* That's so sad.. You have got to fix it soon. Please, please, please... I can't take it anymore... I'm going to explode here... *bawl some more*
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to choke you for that! Ack! No...Kagome! You..you..killed her! Please tell me you are going to have Sesshoumaru bring her back? You are aren't you? Please? But first things first...make sure Naraku gets drawn and quartered! Make it painfIts Its all his fault! Its not yours...its that evil Naraku's fault! I think I'm gonna cry now...!
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April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad! Kagome being dead and all... sniffle... I hope Inuyasha takes hisrd ard and rams it up Naraku's -
Anyway... very nice! I look forward to the next chapter! *runs away and cries in the corner*
Anyway... very nice! I look forward to the next chapter! *runs away and cries in the corner*