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for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

by FaTaLfURy

person MegaBorX
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG I CANT BELIEVE I MISSED THIS THIS ENTIRE TIME....

FLUFFY HAS 2 ARMS.... when he should one have 1!!!!!!!
cant believe i missed that, wasnt until i saw the whole thing about him holding kikyo. he doenst hava a left arm remember
person ramona grimalkit
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooohhhhh, I can't wait until your next chapter *fidgets*! I'm sitting on pins and needles waiting *fidgets*, and I can't wait to begin beta-ing, however that's done. *jumps up and runs around screaming, trying to dislodge pins and needles* POST SOON, PLEEEEASE!
person Kohana
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEE! That was awesome! gaaah I cant wto sto see what happens, gods cliffies like that are sooooo nerve racking! Ill be checking everyday to see if you updated! Keep up the good work ( and bout the threats..dont worry..angst rocks! Ill love it no matter what ya do ^.~ promise! ^^)

Amicalement,

-mi-chan
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok. You fixed it. I'm not going to explode now. I'm just going to sit here patiently waiting for Naraku to get his no-good hanyou ass kicked. *Tee Hee Hee* Ok. Now to my silent vigal... *sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit...* Ok. I can't do that anymore.. My ass hurts... LOL. Anyway. Can't wait for more. Later.
person ktakn_yeni
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thar definitly cheer me up! ^.^ *hughs back* thanks .. ^.^ the fic had a 180º turn.. and i liked it!!!!!!!!! update!!!! you had me waiting 4 days for this chappy... update soooooner ^.^
person Nina
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I had faith in you that you would not leave Kag dead. You're not a mean author, just an author who like to tease and scare the crap out of her readers. Job well accomplished. And I am going to hold you to that free book offer lol. I feel so special. Good luck with the next chapter. I'll be waiting.
person Stefanie
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would never threaten you (hides the baseball bat)....J/K. :) I love this story too much to threaten you with harm. Even if it ended on a very sad and despressing note...I would still love it. But since you brough Inu and Kag back to normal...and the baby is fine...i have to admit i am hoping for a happy ending. With Kikyou dead LOL. OK...i wouldnt mind if she was ok too... alone. ne. She cant have Inuyasha back. I was wondering...where is Rin and Jakken? I just pretend that Sessy left them at the castle. Am I right in thinking that way? That little toad would be of some help right now with his little staff of heads. But then again, I bet he would just be in the way lol. Im prolly the one person that likes that distgusting little toad. I just find him funny. Ok anyways, update soon plz. I cant go to long without another chapter. I start shaking froawl awl awl LOL
person ChibiKagomeVamp
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I lovevd your story SO MUCH!! On a couple of chappies I even cried! I'm upset that just when it was getting good there were no more chapters posted! -sobs- Can you PLEASE e-mail me at ChibiKagomeVamp@aol.com when you post another chappie or write another story? I think you have written the best story I've ever reI'vI've read over 1,000 fanfics)! I'm looking foward to your upcoming work!

A BIG fan,
ChibiKagomeVamp (Lelly!)
person MelMuff
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have a question. I've read in other fanfics that during Inu Yasha's demon transformation, he's usually recognizes Kagome as his mate and would actually mate withy her (LOL) rather than kill her. I'm just wondering if you intend to do that or him killing her during his transformation your own personal view?
person psycho
schedule April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so sad. she better live!!!!!!!! or come back to life!!!!!!!!!! update soon