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for A Love That Transcends Time: Book I

by FaTaLfURy

person InuskagForever
schedule May 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn...when i first started reading this i thought "OH GOODY, theres so many chapters up!!" well now im done and i just have to say... "I LOVE YOUR STORY" damn i never thought i would be writing a review untill the end.... i though u would already have the end up.. i no this is girly of me---but i almost felt like crying in the last chaps ;( ..... so just plzz hurry and review cause i cant wait to read your next chap.... im in suspence and... i dont no what to do..maybe i'll start putting up some of my stories..i no they wont be as good as yours but, still i think some one might find mine interesting, let me just say one more time "I Love Your Story"
cya,
your very very loyal and loving ... reader/ reviewer
person guyanas cutie
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YO THIS STROY MADE ME CRY, BUST OUT IN HAPPINESS AND ETC.
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
PLS FINSH THIS STORY ITS SOOOOOOOOO GOOD
UR SUCH A GOOD WIRTER
GYAL (GIRL) U HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS STORY
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE UP DATE SOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNN


PEACE OUT
person MegaBorX
schedule April 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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i now have carpal tunnel plz update soon
schedule April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm still here... *sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit sit* I'm still waiting
person MelMuff
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Man! I'm so glad Kagome and the pup are alive. And like everyday I keep playing different scenerios in my head of which direction this fic could take. Now you're scaring me about things ppl may not like. I keep envisioning him keeping his stupid promise to Kikyo and him and Kagome having a tearful goodbye. I hope that doesn't happen but it is your fic so you decide what ya want t. t. Anyway, I hope you get over your writer's block soon but take your time. Even though I'm anxious as anybody for the next chap, I believe it's best to take your own sweet time. Otherwise, it may not turn out good or as you expected. I believe rushing things isn't good so take your time. I honestly don't mind and will wait patiently.
person psycho
schedule April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*jumps up and down giddily*

she'a alive she's alive!!!!

update soon
person tigerfae
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
MUST HAVE MORE! How could you leave it at such a terrible cliffie?! I am running over to yahoo to see if you updated there first... please let there be more posted! It can't end there...
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*stops trying to choke you as I read * Nice! I liked that! But that was mean! * sniffles *

* continues * O.o! I see you cut us off at the knees...Oh well! At least Naraku is about to get an old fashion whuppin'! ^_~ Its been a long time in coming. Yay to the death of Naraku!
person sutlesarcasm
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is the first time I have reviewed this fic, so here goes. Man, oh man, but you have everything in the fic. I first stumbled across it in MM, but there was only the first 2 chapters. Bummer. So, I looked for you other places. I really enjoy your writing style, and that you never let up the pressure in this story. I love that you settled the differences between Sesshoumaru and Inu Yasha, and had them presented them with a united front against Naraku. I also love that you have made Kagome so strong. Wa go. go. Please keep writing, I can't wait to see what's going to happen next. I have so much trouble getting onto AFF, would it be too much trouble for you to update on MM also? I would appreciate it. May your muse never stop kissing you.
person MegaBorX
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok Fury-chan u have my undivided atention and trust ... go for it.

and also to all other revieweers trust fury-chan she knows what shes doing and everything will come full circle