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Love it can't wait to read more of ur work 

first off, i would like to say kisaaaa!!! I read this story all day long and now it's over. It was very well done. One of the best i have read on here so far, actually...sorry, i know thatls not saying much...as there are great stories, but people either can't spell or don't speak english and translated it. My sister writes a lot of fanfic(she's really good. Whitewolfffy on fanfiction.com) but as far as i know (as she has not experienced that yet) she doesn't write lemons. Yours are really good. Not awkward at all. I am sorry i didn't review as i read, but i only review at the last chapter i read. That way i can give a good review. You are an amazing author and should look into doing your own stuff. I would buy it. I am finding the next part to this story, and i look forward to it. I am writing something too, but am too scared to put it out there. It's not fanfic. Kinda blocked. Anyway, i like how you kept the characters' personalities true to themselves. I love the end and think that you couldn't have done better. Please don't lose your unique spark. Got to go now. Early morning. Domo!
-Stormi-

I googled it and kagomes eyes are brown, but I don't really think it matters what color the eyes are, it is your story after all :) ^_^ yea its always best to keep with how each character is but I myself don't usually stick with how the characters are.

Where are you????
You have to come back,
you can't leave us hanging
like this, it's cruel!

Please, please come back,
we miss you!

You're coming back right? You're gonna finish this, right?
Please, Please, Please, come back! Don't leave us hanging, it's just too good!

damn you need to finish this.

OMG! I really love ur story!!! XD it made me cry, beautifully done. I can't wait till the you post up the next chappy...I'll be waiting!! ^_^

i'm a big fan of Inuyasha and one of the things i love about it is the relationship of Inuyasha and Kagome. I'v read other stories on inu.adultfanfiction and yours is by far the best, i can't help but wonder what will happen with Inuyasha, Kagome, Kikyou and the shikon no tama(the shikon jewel) but i know it will be good.

ummm

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