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k, i'm confused... is he inuyasha? so far, it dusn't seem he he is... inuyasha is mean, like kag had said, but he didn't mean it. and that kento was such a jacka**, so it couldn't be him, rite? iono though. after the first chapter, i thought it was him, you know, sealing the well and inuyasha could've never gone to the future and just aged. then marry seito... but that didn't happen. itz a cool story, but confusing! is kento naraku? oi.

kisses!

-hershey

oh yeah, i was also gonna ask for you to put more inukag stuff and less seito! i dun like her. she is so creepy... and inuyasha is like the best!

xxxx

-hershey

Great story it was really good. Please write more i really want to see if the mom breaks up with him or they get married.

ooh this has alot of promise..this is getting really good..Ive not seen this sort of story line before and I sooo cant wait for more please please please update ok??? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-) btw hes not a real man is he?? hes a demon huh??? either way I soooooooo hope Inu kicks his ass..hehe..

god k's 's evil, I like this story, you know I wonder sometimes where people like you get your ideas for your stories. update soon, I'm so jealous

Um, I have to say it is a very good story line. I thought that when I read it the first time... when it was called 'Father Figure' by the popular author Rosefire. The story line, dialog, characters... they are all the same. The only thing different is this is a paraphrasing of her work, and A POOR imitation at best. I wholeheartedly feel you should be free to write your own variant of the concept, just give a little credit where credit is due. It's only polite. I know if it were MY fic being imitated without my permission (and it IS without permission, I checked) I'd be beyond livid.