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for The Father I Always Wanted?

by 12blue12

person CeltGdds
schedule March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm all for the angstyness but KAgome in my opinion wouldnt be stupid enough to get help now that she knows Kento's like supernaturo who why doesnt she? I mean Inuyasha could just kill him or try to or something or Kaede could help her out. It's just a thought.
person WOW!
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really good story here hope u will update soon because i can't wait for the next update to come! i hope cagome wont end all dragically because that wud just suck and wats the deal with inu so understanding isnt that a little ooc well update soon k!
person shaina
schedule March 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh jesus fucking christ!!!! When the hell is kagome going to talk to inuyasha about her problems? I've been waiting every single chapter for that to happened and it hasn't. Kagome turns to inuyasha for everything it seems, so why not this?
person shewny
schedule March 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOW WRITE MORE PLZ!!!
person yeah
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well luv the story hope u update soon yup yup yup and now i have set up a petition to kill of kento or at least a petition should be started well UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
person JadeDarkFeather
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, Nice story and a good plot but might I suggest you find a beta. There were a few mistakes i caught such as Henyou instead of Hanyou. and other little spelling mistakes that made it looked rushed. Slow down use your spell check or have a friend beta for you. But its a good story with a good plot.
person Mija
schedule March 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok ok I loved the last chap and dun dun dun the plot thinckens..hehe and the guy in shades?? either Sess or Inu and if your asking for pairings I still want it to be Inu/Kag...pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee??? hehe..anyhow this chap was just as great as the others and soooooo want to kill this Kento guy..grrrrrrrrrrrr..let someone hurt him?? Inu hopefully?? pretty please??? hehe update soon k?? please?? ty ty ty huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
person Concerned
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is very similar to a story posted on mediaminer
by Rozefire. Right down to the part where the evil stepfather
feels up Kagome's leg and grandpa disappears. If you got the
idea for your storyfrom another story, it is common courtesy to
give credit where it is due. But so far there are too many coincedences
person Sesshygirl
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If Kagome had marks on her body from bastbastard, Kento, why didn't she show her mother the marks and say, "Look at these! These are from him! You might need to re-think about marrying him!!! Bitch!!!" then take a bunch of stuff, and run to the feudal era?
person rach
schedule March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!