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for The Father I Always Wanted?

by 12blue12

person Elise
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a good story. Now UPDATE!!!
person shewny
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Do write more and faster its SO SOSOSO GOOD!! I like to hear what happens WRITE MORE SOON THANKS!
person KiKi
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep going
person cancan227
schedule April 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT THE FU**?
person maria
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I'm confused. You said in your summary that this is Inu/Kag, but then he's kissing Kikyo!?! What the hell!! I hope Kagome kicks his ass.
person lilcaliphny
schedule April 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this is a very good story even though inuyasha kissed kikyo i hope it is still a inu/kag fic but it is still great
person Elise/Demon Child
schedule March 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is such a good story. I just can't wait to see what happens next. This story is really different from any other Inuyasha fanfic I've come across. The only thing I might change about it is Kagome's mom's character. She seems a little aquiescent. When I see her in the series I imagine a very strong person who is not easily fooled. Couse maybe she is being spell bound the most in this tale. Anyhow keep up the good work and UPDATE!!! Otherwise I may have to force feed lime jello. HeHeHeHe

DC
person shewny
schedule March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOW WRITE MORE I WANT TO HEAR MORE PLEASE!!! :(
person lil_angel0426
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY I want to slap him so bad right now. He is a good evil character. Is InuYasha gonna save Kagome from him? I hope so. Please update soon
person rachael
schedule March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 6 was awesome, please update soon I can't wait to see what happens next.