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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That poor girl, I could see her comtemplating to take her life. I think that Rin will
only get better if Sess confesses how he feels as well as ask the toughest question
he could ask Rin. "What happen during you imprisionment with her kidnappers". By
Rin telling him everything and he listening to her, maybe she can gain back hife.ife.
Please update soon if you do not I will look like this >_<, if you update as soon as
tomorrow I will look like this ^_^. Just kidding, update ASAP.
only get better if Sess confesses how he feels as well as ask the toughest question
he could ask Rin. "What happen during you imprisionment with her kidnappers". By
Rin telling him everything and he listening to her, maybe she can gain back hife.ife.
Please update soon if you do not I will look like this >_<, if you update as soon as
tomorrow I will look like this ^_^. Just kidding, update ASAP.
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yeah, I can see why she'd want to kill herself. And I can see why Sessh would be confused and scared for her. We all know he adores her, but SHE doesn't. I think he needs to let her know how he feels...
after he bring her back to life.
again.
after he bring her back to life.
again.
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March 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
she shouldnt die!! she should snap back together. we really need a mental cleansing. shes starting to piss me off but I KNOW I KNOW, if i went through that i would probably be crazy. its just frustrating to see her like this. lets heal rin! keep up the good work.
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March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am a Philosophy major and I believe the answer is.... Descartes???!!!
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like where this is going. I think you've really kept in character with Sessy. And yes, if you have a sequel in mind I'd personally love to read it.
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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesome as well as very powerful chapter. What put me in an awe is how
Rin 'suddenly' becomes aware of her sounding when Sesshoumaru t to to
her. Its like she could only find meaning in her life if Sesshoumaru is right there
in it and by that she will never be stronger nor better. I see perfectly what Sess is doing by making Rin learn self-defense course,
but I also see that Sess does not completely understand what Rin is going through.
I hope that one day soon she be able to talk about it to him since he is the only
one she trust.
To answer your question, I would like very much if you write a sequel to the story
and it in Sess POV. Let me know when that will be in the works. Update soon how about tommorrow. ^_^ just kidding
Rin 'suddenly' becomes aware of her sounding when Sesshoumaru t to to
her. Its like she could only find meaning in her life if Sesshoumaru is right there
in it and by that she will never be stronger nor better. I see perfectly what Sess is doing by making Rin learn self-defense course,
but I also see that Sess does not completely understand what Rin is going through.
I hope that one day soon she be able to talk about it to him since he is the only
one she trust.
To answer your question, I would like very much if you write a sequel to the story
and it in Sess POV. Let me know when that will be in the works. Update soon how about tommorrow. ^_^ just kidding
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sigh...............good job. very well written. i love all the questions she asks herself, the obvious display of a tormented mind. gah, i feel so bad for her......depressing but hopeful for a full recovery. continue the fantastic job!!!
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Keep writing!
That philosohpy quote sounds familiar, but my last philosophy class was way back in 1998 and I only took the one. BTW, is Sessh unsure of how to help Rin? Because it seems like... He's helping, but not quie enough. Not that he'd be aware of ehr fears and doubts, but shouldn't he be asking a few more questions? Or maybe he's afraid to ask, worried that telling will force her to relive or even that hearing will force him into a rage, something he doens't want her to witness?
Just thoughts. There are a few typos, though I can't remember precicely where. Does't interefer with enjoyment of the story
That philosohpy quote sounds familiar, but my last philosophy class was way back in 1998 and I only took the one. BTW, is Sessh unsure of how to help Rin? Because it seems like... He's helping, but not quie enough. Not that he'd be aware of ehr fears and doubts, but shouldn't he be asking a few more questions? Or maybe he's afraid to ask, worried that telling will force her to relive or even that hearing will force him into a rage, something he doens't want her to witness?
Just thoughts. There are a few typos, though I can't remember precicely where. Does't interefer with enjoyment of the story
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon, I love this story.
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March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...that was some serious stuff. i feel sorry for rin's sate of mind. no one should feel like that. my heart was churning everytime she had a flashback of those horrible memories. what do you mean when her climax of fearing is coming in the next chapter? didn't she suffer enough. hahahaha....poor thing...i hope this isn't what rape/abused victims go through. it is HORRIBLE! but i am looking forward to seeing how you will write it. i think you should make a sequel especially since it will be from sesshoumaru's point of view. update soon!