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well u got me caught there, for a moment I really thought Rin was already save...
hahahaha.... a twist in the story line... well please update soon yeah... I'm really wondering
if Sesshoumaru will ever be coming...

I am very glad that Rin finalas aas able to free herself and finally realize that she was worthy of Sess, but please put up next chapter ASAP! We need to know what happened to Sess in that forest and how they will eventually get back together again!

Your writing is wonderful. I look at all these authors and authoress trying to justifly Kagome & Sesshomaru as a challenge to their writing skill but I think the Rin/Sesshomaru pairing is the toughest to write because we only see her as a young girl in the anime/manga. trying to build on Rin personalility is what draws me to the pairing and I believe you have one of the best stories here I also think you are one of the few writers that has written Sesshomaru perfect. Please post more of this wonderful story!!!

Well, I suppose that you have redeemed yourself. But no more horrible cliff hangers like you did in the last chapter! You evil person you! You are such a talented writer, and you speak to your audience, which is more than I have seen from a lot of stories on this site.

You do a wonderful job expression the emotions of each character, yet retaining their actual characteristics. I pray that you finish this soon, as I am now completely and utterly addicted.

And don't mind the flamers (lmao no pun intended) they are just dumb bastards trying to get a cheap rise out of aspiring writers.

:) Write on!

Its all so awsome! Im really glad things are looking better for Rin. Keep up the good work and vupdate soon!!!

I was pleasantly surprised to see an update for this story and I loved it. Your explanation of why Rin needed to go through what she went through is justble.ble. As it is, Rin needed to own this in order to overcome it. She couldn't be saved, and continue to be the victim; she had to free herself. Loved that symbolism and reality. Thanks!

I think I love you. (And I mean that in the most flattering, least creepy kind of way naturally) Need next chapter...*twitch*

Oh, and this means nothing now that it is after the fact, but I was anticipating it being a spell, I just couldn't figure out who would have done such a thing. Thus, I was surprised when everyone else thought it was a dream one way or the other. (But I guess it was kind of a spell that envoked a dreamish-type thing.) And the whole time I was reading this chapter I was just giddy seeing how it was all coming together. How this tragedy was what was needed to open Sess up about his guilt (my prediction for next chapter I guess) and Rin's chance to feel like she redeemed herself and conquered her "demons" both literally and figuratively.

OMG!

This was so good. I totally wasn't expecting this. You have got to be one of the best writers out there. Thiapteapter alone was awesome. I don't have enough words to describe how I felt about it. I love Sess/Rin, and I like the "in character" quality of your writing, but I also like how complex you make things. Wonderful!

More soon :)

that was haaarsh!! Waiting to find out whats real and whats not.

ACCCCk... you're sooo cruel ^_^ , just when I thought things were going nicely... but I gotta admit you're good, need more, please write more!!!!