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"Parting is all we know of Heaven, and all we need of Hell." I'll be sad to see the story come to an end, but I'll probably be very happy with the conclusion. I could tell ch 9 was really important for Rin. It's like the pique of her psychological and emotional development, as covered in this story . . . I'll be happy to see the two mates reunited. They just BELONG together. What else is there to say? Oh yeah, here's your daily dose of affirmation--two big thumbs up! ^__^

Your fic is like Schindler's List. It's something everybody SHOULD read/see just ONCE, and then NEVER go back and read/see it again. It's moving, it's poignant's 's tragic, it's touching, it's uplifting, it's inspiring . . . but, at the same time, so many HORRIBLE things happen in this story that I simply couldn't stomach reading it again . . . I mean, it's a GREAT story, but it's incredibly draining--you get your hopes up, and then they're dashed to bits. It's like an emotional roller coaster ride . . . But, don't get me wrong. I LIKE roller coasters . . . All the emotions are so RAW and vivid; you'd have to be dead not to respond to the characters' turmoil. And it was the same thing with Schindler's List . . . But, anyway, I'm starting to ramble, and it just turned 5 am where I am, so I think it's time I stopped writing ^__^ You're doing a GREAT job, and I look forward to your next update . . . But, as with Schindler's List, once I finish it, I'm never looking at it again--theMaven :)

i love it, i love it. rin is so much ngernger now and coming to grips w/herself and i love how you've shown that. can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the great work.

I hope you are happy. I will be late to work this morning because I saw you had updated! And on top of it I'm taking more time to write a review. What is this power you have over me? You must keep writing! What will I do without my fix?

The chapter was great and very much needed for the character. And waiting for the reunion with Sesshoumaru is such sweet torture.

HUZZAH!!!!! that was beautiful! i feel so impowered right now i could lift a mountain and take on Hilter (if he was alive). anyways, beautiful work, just fantastic. im completely excited for the last chapter and the sequel. keep up the amazing storying telling and enjoy ur spring break!

it is truly amazing to me how many wonderful stories there are on this site, yours included. The creativity and work nessecary for such works always amazes me.

This is a great story. I'm REALLY loving it. Please continue! And please let there be a lemon? Bad Shaid likes lemons. Not so much for the content as for the meaning behind them.

great chapter, keep it up. can't wait to read the next couple of chapter. your doing a great job.

I love how you had Rin face her demons and actually fight and defeat them. At first I was afraid for her
when she saw Sesshoumaru leave her in her 'dream'. I though that she had giviing up
but I was impress and happy when she started to fight back. Apparently in this chapter Sess and Rin has
form a conection with each other ( and they did not form it completely bse tse they did not mating). I found
that part amazing because Rin could have feel Sess pain, helplessnes and rage and she wanted to help him( like she
always have before her kidnapping as well when she was a little girl).

As for the flamer they need a life and continue to screw with their mind. Update soon like in 12 hours. ^_^ just kidding.

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!! *does an irish jig for u* wonderful! good chapter and good ass kicking. all i can think of to say is YAY! i loved it! keep up the good work, its beautiful!

you have become my favorite author on this site! you are genius...a pure genius i tell you! i envy your writing and thinking. it was a GREAT chapter. rin hella kicked ass! she had strength that she didn't know. i hope you will update soon. =]