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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awe my friend, that was good. great way to end a story. i feel satisfied and happy. cant wait for your sequel, but please, lets keep EVERYONE alive. hehe, keep up the great work!
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great chapter! I'm glad that Rin has finelly won that battle within herself. I sound like a freak. Anyway great chapter and I can't wait to read more! I can't wait to find out when she catches up to Sess.
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March 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
..at your service.
I must admit I started chanting 'Go Rin!' when she KICKED Ackki's[sp?] arse...truly a wonderful [healing] moment. But I truly like this story because it IS different...I think it's kind of a shame that it has to be found on this particular website and not the usual ff.net site.
Since every story there that deals with an older Rin & Sesshoumaru in the same light, yours was the difference I delighted in, sad but delightful, got me kinda frustrated, but yeah, very intriguing.
Anyway can't wait to see how it ends and will be waiting on your sequel.
I must admit I started chanting 'Go Rin!' when she KICKED Ackki's[sp?] arse...truly a wonderful [healing] moment. But I truly like this story because it IS different...I think it's kind of a shame that it has to be found on this particular website and not the usual ff.net site.
Since every story there that deals with an older Rin & Sesshoumaru in the same light, yours was the difference I delighted in, sad but delightful, got me kinda frustrated, but yeah, very intriguing.
Anyway can't wait to see how it ends and will be waiting on your sequel.
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've only gotten through the first 5 chas, bs, but I think the story is very complex. I felt a wide range of emotions throughout different parts of the story, which I applaud in any story. I always need those moments of relief from the other intense emotions. I've never taken psychology, but I love the concepts that you have embedded into your story. I couldn't stop reading for quite awhile because the story held my attention so well. :-D
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
new chapter.....yummy......
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March 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this chr! :r! :) Lol, I was all set to review and ask why Sesshoumaru couldn't feel her searching for him, but TADA, you answered it at the bottom! :)
Please get the last chapter up soon, I definately look forward to seeing how this plays out! :)
Please get the last chapter up soon, I definately look forward to seeing how this plays out! :)
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think that this chapter was very much necessary. I ties up any lose ends that might be lingering
about Rin and her feelings about everything. I hope that the last chapter will be just as long or
longer as this one. Is that enough inspiration for you. ^_^ Update soon.
about Rin and her feelings about everything. I hope that the last chapter will be just as long or
longer as this one. Is that enough inspiration for you. ^_^ Update soon.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this chapter. mental healing is great i tell you. she deserves to be happy now with all the pain she has suffered. i do hope you will be able to finish the last chapter before spring break ends. i LOVE your story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon please. =]
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story nice to see a fanfiction that has a decent story with twists and such instead of the traditional mindless sex. Keep up the good work and I hope you finish thta last chapter soon.
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March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please put the last chapter up soon! We all want to see these two reunited.