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June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on having the guts to have gut wrenching things happen to main characters :-)
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May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed ur 1st chp. its very dramatic and moving. Very detailed, as if in front of you, eazy to picture, great story!
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March 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome ending to an awesome story. And the sequel sounds pretty good, too ^__^
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am so glad your updated! it truly made my day today. im tha that this story is coming to an end because it was such a GREAT story! your writing was beautiful...its was so good i can't even describe it! writing lemons are hard but im glad you didn't write one. sometimes it is best to leave it to the imagination and there are times when just cuddling and doing sweet stuff like cleaning off blood of your mate is just romantic. you don't need to write a lemon to demostrate how two people love each other. i am looking forward to the sequel of this story. they're having a baby!!!! well see you when you write again. =] x 10
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March 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Why did Sess had to kill the woman and the houshi-sama. They were just trying to help Rin.
No lemon, that's ok not every story must have a lemon, but I wish that you could have put a little
lime at the end. You did when Rin was rape. Given time to her rapist not good. Sess should have
equal time as well. Please release the first chapter to the sequel soon.
No lemon, that's ok not every story must have a lemon, but I wish that you could have put a little
lime at the end. You did when Rin was rape. Given time to her rapist not good. Sess should have
equal time as well. Please release the first chapter to the sequel soon.
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved the ending! :) Thank you for the great story, and I definately look forward to the sequel!
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*whew* Finally it's over....boy, that was a LONG journey but I'm glad Rin found her strength. Like I said it's not everyday I read a story like this...tis' truly different.
I'm curious to know if Inuyasah will appear in your next story, because I'm curious to see how you portray him, since you are good at keeping everyone in character.
Anyway I'll be keeping a lookout....
I'm curious to know if Inuyasah will appear in your next story, because I'm curious to see how you portray him, since you are good at keeping everyone in character.
Anyway I'll be keeping a lookout....
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. This was a good ending to a great story. I can not wait to you write your sequel.
I hope when you get back into the s of of school that you will release your first chapter.
I hope to see the first chapter soon. ^_^
I hope when you get back into the s of of school that you will release your first chapter.
I hope to see the first chapter soon. ^_^
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cries* i cant believe its over ~i hate it when stories end~!!! Lucky for me though....it really isnt the END end.....thank god for sequels
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March 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I simply adore you. This story made me feel good and that along with your writing and just the overall premise of the story is what I will go away with. I loved the lessons taught and lessons learned by each character and I appreciated the subtle sense of romance and deep, abiding love. That rocked and no, you didn't need any lemons for my imagination took care of all that. As it was, just getting there, to the last chapter with all that went on in a few lines between Rin and Sess, was worth it. The little taste of what's to come was delicious. Thank you.