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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very good story, very visual but one question; What happened to Inuyasha since we can peice together that Kagome's probably dead?
Characters: 10
Story: 9
Language/Spelling: 10
Characters: 10
Story: 9
Language/Spelling: 10
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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far ^^
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July 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I had totally forgotten about this story. It's great that you are continuing with it.
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July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OHhh>..This is soooo good! Please continue and while I know you have a life.....*Gets down and begs* Please don't be like the others that take months and months to update...PLEASE!
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story so far but, on this site, I can't tell when you last updated. I hope you add to it soon because I think it is a unique plot that I hadn't run across before. I look forward to more.
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September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is an awesome fic, please continue soon, i luv this its so cute yet so sad, please let kouga help inuyasha soon :) great job so far
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July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GRATE STORY, AND I HOPE THAT YOU WILL KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK....TELL ME DID KAGOME DIE GIVING BIRTH TO HER BABY GIRL, CAUSE I GOTTA KNOW? ANYHOO I TOTALY LOVED THIS STORY, AND I TRULY HOPE THAT YOU WILL ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO IT SOON PLEASE, CAUSE I'LL BE WAITING TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT O.K.
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*poke* *pokepoke* *pokepokepoke* Update? Pwease? *bounces* I wanna see what happens! I've never seen a fic like this before! I'll give you cookies!! Just update!
**Zeph**
**Zeph**
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVES IT!!! its great it really is please update soon!
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March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, my first thought is "YOU CAN'T END IT THERE!!!!!!" where the hell is the rest of this wonderful piece of fanfiction?!?!?!?!?! You had BEST finish this or you will feel the wrath that is "Ye Pharoh's Anger"!! but seriously, your characterization is wonderful! the way you have the children melded into the fic is splendid! very realistic and natural. I like you "Kouga speech pattern" much better than that of some of the fics i've read. it flows a lot more nicely. Inuyasha is sooooo sweeeeet! WHERE'S THE REST?!?!?! grrrr