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for Dirty Life

by Strawberries

person kari
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome chapter, i'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. i can't find out what happends next, i must know! hope u update soon! please soon!
person bunnybop102
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is sad, really but when does Sesshoumaru come in. I would pay alot for that sweet piece of ass. Good job you better complete this story or else.
person LadyRayne
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So what she a virgin? Forgive me but Im kind of slow on these kind of things. Update soon. oh yeah how old is Rin anyway?
person XYZ
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, another great chapter. I can almost see the story coming to an end *sob* but I love it. Can't wait till you update again. Just a question - Is Rin a virgin? From the conversation between her and Inuyasha I would believe that she is, but when she talked to Miroku earlier I thought she had implied that she was raped by her foster father? Anyway, please, please update soon!
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see you updated. I love this story and missed it. I'm happy to know that Miroku won't have to do anything because of his injured condition, but I'm disappointed that the 'show' wasn't put off until he was well. I was looking forward to the threesome. The tension between Rin and Miroku having to touch each other along with Inu. But it's your story to do with as you please. I'm sure the twosome will be great. It's just a let down because of the previous build up. Good luck with the next chappie. I'll be anxiously awaiting ^_^
person Apathy5
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your story. I can't wait to see what will happen next. Please review soon. By the way, I don't know how to make AFF send me a note to tell me when you update. Could you send me an email when you do? Are you doing that?
person u dont need to know
schedule April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEASSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEE finish this dtory PLEAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEE..........etc...
person Kari
schedule March 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm back!!!! i haven't read fanfiction in awhile but i'm back and this story hasn't left my mind. it was the first story i was gonna read and i missed it. i love it, it's sad but so true, some people are scared of the truth out there that this does happen. i love this story so much, it clings to your heart. i can't wait till u update again i gotta know what happends next!
person abheff
schedule March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic!! This is the first fic that I have reviewed on this site, but I had to tell you of the wonderful job that I think that you have done with this fic. I can not wait until you post the next chapter!! I am totally hooked. If there is a way that I could be alerted when you post, I would truly like that. Keep up the great job!!
person Xen
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just wanted to toss you a review to let you know I'm really loving your story and can't wait until you update more! :)