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Are you trying to kill me?! Why do you keep writing so many cliff hangers?! I can't live without this story the suspense is literally killing me and here I find that you updated without telling me?! *sob* I should be in drama class... Anyway... Update sooner PLEASE! I love this story and the flash back was really descriptive. Will Rin really Screw it up? Why isn't Inuyasha Nervous? What'll happen if naraku finds out what REALLY happened to Miroku?! So many questions so little computer time... Like I said update soon

I must say I am really enjoying this fic and would like to read more... The story line is very well put together and isn't boring at all. I like the detail you put in, for it makes it much more interesting. I feel relieved though that there will be no incest for that would have been just aweful for the two. Well I am anticipating the next chapter and hope to read it soon. Keep up the good work^__^!!!

Whew, I can't tell you how relieved I am that Miroku won't be participating.

(huggles author and squeals like ecstatic fangirl)

omg! i'm so glad you updated this story and i'm so glad that you aren't dead! this is sooo good and the update was even better! i like where this story is going and i can't wait to find out what you do with the next chapter. i can't wait to see what you do next and for some reason, i really want to see that lemon between rin-chan and inu-chan. although...

and how sweet and awesome was kagome!

(excited sigh) okay, so that's all i've got to do now, rant about how awesome this story is!

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

this is really amazing please dont abandon this fic right the ending and the rest of the chapters cant waite to read them when there out

This is a great chapter! I can't wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter! I can't wait to read more!! :)

oh my gosh this is a really good fic so far i can't waite to find out what happens to kagome and Inuyasha and if inuyasha and miroku with rin get out of the life or not

wow...this story is....different. i love the shades of gray that you really have captured in the story. it's not the nice fairy tale fic that everyone smiles and is freakin cheery. it's the truth of runaway's...the true life depiction of how it is for those more unfortuniate souls who are doomed to that kind of life. i think you have captured it wonderfully. Naraku is creepy and deserves two holes in the head...along with those freakish juiceheads he has working for them. i LOVE your sesshoumaru. he is sooo different then any other i have ever read about. hands down. he is strong willled and yet caring...not afraid to show his love and yet when needed to be, he is that cold level headed stoic figure that we all love. (and just thinking about a dark haired sesshoumaru...oh man....) wonderful story. i LOVE it. i must admit, some of the yaoi has scarred a part of me, but in the context of the story, it is perfect. it fits in just like a piece of the puzzle. props to you! keep it up....i really am intrested to see what inu does in regards to the 'arrangement' with Rin and how Sesshoumaru will handle seeing that. (put Naraku's head through the glass!!!!!) keep it up!!!

whoa. you dont know how happy i am that miroku wont be in that.. guh. i totally would have stopped reading... but yey! he wont! and rin will just pretend that inu is sess... which will make things alot nicer... and what do you have in mind for the ending? plleeeeeeease tell me that it will be happy. ie: everyone will be alive and starting their respective new lives... please? i can't take much more of this horrible sadness!!! :(.... but i still love the fic, and i'm excited about the next chapter...

Is there any way that Sess be put into that situation with Rin instead of Inuyasha? Know how sick Naraku is, he may tell Sess
in order for the kids to go free he must do the deed instead of Inuyasha. I think he went through to much over the weekend.
Put Sess on the spot especially he has feeling for Rin and Rin for him. By the way, how old is Rin. I hope she is around sixteen?
Update soon.