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July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chap 5-well after reading the author notes I would just like to commend you on writing outside your comfort zone, as all good authors should. I think your sex scenes M/M are pretty good for you not to know anything about it.
And this is a real issue and everything I've read so far is very realistic and probably has happened to someone at sometime. On your writing...very very good. it's clear and draws the reader in.
Good job
And this is a real issue and everything I've read so far is very realistic and probably has happened to someone at sometime. On your writing...very very good. it's clear and draws the reader in.
Good job
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July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
2 very wonderful chapters, i was so happy to see that u have updated. i'm gonna be so sad to see this wonderful story end, but alas all good things must come to an end. but well excited to see what's up your sleve next.
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July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story. Ok, well not the whole Rin and Miroku being forced to have sex, but the way this story is written. It does have a few grammatical errors, but who doesn't make those? Please update soon.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well...life seems to be getting better for the three of them. yay for that. but something in my gut says that Naraku won't let go that easy. i fear for Kagome and Sango. call it a hunch. but anyway, still a wonderfuly written story! love it!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was skimming through stories when I saw this and I thought to my self 'It's a miracle two updates in the same month' The story still has a long way to go... I mean will Inuyasha get with Kagome? Will Rin ever be able to look at Sesshomaru again? Keep updating!
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi, I love your story, even if it’s kind of very dark. Normally I wouldn’t read it, but something about it captivated me and I’m glad that I didn’t give up hope that one day you will update. Things seem to get better now and I’m seeing a happy end. You too? But it doesn’t matter now, because I will be keeping an eye on this fic anyway. I wonder what will Rin and Sess do now. And I missed Kagome and Sango in this mess, so I’m curious how their next meeting will look like.
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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't WAIT until you update!! Please I'm beggin' you hurry up!!!^_^
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG!!!!! I love this story i had read up to chapter 27 about 2 months ago but when i tried to look for it it was gone and i couldn't remember the name of it. I just wanna say great job to the author you should publish this book in a book of short stories. Keep up the good work i look foward to seeing new chapters by next month! ^__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________^
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Are they going to find out what had happened at Naraku's? I hope everything works out.. Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
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July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapter. Poor Rin to feel like a whore becasue of the sick Naraku. Hey Inuyasha and her were pretty hot. Oh my I am sorry. Well keep writing and great job.