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for Dirty Life

by Strawberries

person Babsie
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well...Maybe e ise is a light in the end of the tunel...But will Inuyasha have the gut to ask for help to Kagome...or even if she try to help...will et het her?
Yes, you got a point when you said that some great stories start shoking .
So I guess I´ll have to wait to see what will happen.
Update soon :-)
person Babsie
schedule February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this first chapter had some impact on me. I don´t like the idea of Inuyasha being a male horn, but looks like he didn´t like this life. Are Inu gay? Will someone apper in the stor hel help them? I don´t see a way to Inuyasha and Miroku being drag out of this life without some therapy...and in the end...they could be sooo messed up that try suicide or drugs.
Don´t get me wrong...I´m not flaming you. It´s just that the plot of this story shock me a bit...and because of that I had to review to you...It´s not everyday that somebody could shock me :-)
Keep writing, I hope you find a good solutions to this situation that I can´t see at now.
If you wanna do something different...you are doing a great work.
person tigeryas X
schedule February 16, 1920 at 12:00 AM
H Inu Inuyasha's back in Kikyo's clutches. (Insert maniacal laughter) Now, what sort of sick, twisted things can she come up with? (Girl after my own heart; starts wringing hands together) She could do somethings that would humiliate IY in front of Kagome, & humiliate Kagome by making her seeke ske she's still a child, a novice when it comes to the carnal pleasures. Wonder if that apartment has a large, picture window? Anyway, looking forward w/ great interest to next chapter. God, I love this story.