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Loved the story so far. Can I hire IY by chance? Though I don't guarantee he'd ever leave my house. :) Anyway, keep goinI'dI'd love to see the girls get these two out of this.

i really liked your story. please write more! i feel so bad for inu yasha and miroku! will miroku have any remebeerance or will he be under the sedative the whole time? when are kagome and sango going to fall for inu yasha and miroku? i like how naraku is reffered to as "the pimp" tee hee!

OHMYGOD!
Will Inuyasha snap? Being abused is one thing..other is when you are at the "part" of the agressor...Inu is abusing his best friend...WOW...That would make him transform in a Yokai out of control...mayb not.
Answer me something....who are the other side of the mirror? :-)
Naraku? Kouga? Sesshoumarru? The girls? Kagome´s mother? Kaede?
Just curious.
And about Naraku....I don´t know...what about turn him back in Onigume...With just one eye and a lot of bandages
Please, update soon

The idiot Babsie made a idiot comment...
I just forgot that Inuyasha is human in this story...sorry.
Forget about him being mad and transform...or maybe not...A human person could "in some way" transform too.
Well...here I´m babbling again.
Just write to ask ...sorrryyyyyy

all i can manage to say is: OH...MY...GOD...
=^@.@^=

Dark Very Dark. Your writing paints a very sad look into part of society that goes unnotice. Even though you made them out to be at the cusp of adulthood they are still considered boys and it is a shame that some of this really goes on in the world. Well I will try to keep up with this one can't wait for more!!!

I just had to put in a review for this. I felt ashamed and perverted at first to even write a review, but (oh God!) I (in a really small voice) do like your story. I think that it's written pretty well, and the flow of it is good from what I've read so far. And like someone else wrote, there are a lot of guys out there 'into' this type of situation, and probably a lot of them, for whatever reason got them into it, get 'stuck' with no way out and nowhere to turn. People think you can just walk away of bad situationt itt it's not like that and it isn't true... try escaping from domestic abuse.
I even though it's hard to see this happening to Inu and Miroku, I hope that you don't end it into a fairy tale (meaning a happy ending with M/F) too soon. But I hate to see them continuing to be in such a situation for very long. I could be wrong (hoping I'm not) but since you've introduced Kag and Sango I feel that you will be getting them (proper partners K/I, S/M) together. (Please - shouting from background).
I love Sesshoumaru, and I HOPE you don't make him into a girlie guy. Some people like to portray him as such just because he's so pretty!
One of your other reviewers wrote about probably needing therapy after going through that kind of stuff -- which could be true, but... I just hope they work things out well enough on their own... and after such that - (Please dont!) - that Inu and Miroku start thinking about each other - not after they get out and have their girlfriends...blah, blah, blah... And that is IF you decided to work things out that way. Of course you could have something totally different in mind for your story.
Are you thinking of bring Sesshoumaru in for maybe a girl and gets together with Rin itheither paying high price for a virgin, or just that he winds up with her being one?
Well, anyway... Lot of guessing/suggestions on my part which I don't know how you feel about, but anyway.... I will be keeping tabs on your story -- I wish chapter 4 was a bit longer -- but do tak take offense to being told that! It just... left me hanging (cliffy i mean!) and doing one of InuYasha's struggled gawking sounds. I am real happy that you got the last couple of chapters up so fast... Please keep up the good work, and this is the longest review I've ever done... see once i got over my shyness...!

Ummm.... I'm really hoping that you don't take this personally. But, I hope to God that this incredible story does tur turn into a slash one centered around Miroko and inuyasha. I was really hoping that it was a realistic story with inuyasha slowly finding happiness with kagome. And Miroku with Sango. But, the story is incredible so far, I'm just a little worried now.

Kind of dark and angsty I like it plz contiue on.

I definitely like where this is going. you're a natural at writing, and i anxiously await the coming chapters.