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for Dirty Life

by Strawberries

person KagoKitty
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
is the woman client kikyou?? damn...i'm just wishin its kagome!! that would be so sweet!! man...i'm kinda scared for rin...hope she's gonna be okay!! please update soon...hoping for it to lighten a bit though this is really really good so far!!!
toodles,
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person xXx
schedule March 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story. Nicely written and a topic that hasn'en den done a hundred times over yet. I am wondering - this mysterious woman, the one that Inuyasha is to escort - might it be Kikyou?
person Mija
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwww poor Rin..soo she knows what her brother does?? omg can you imagine being in the bathroom listening to your brother being ummmm well you know by a client?? awwwwwwwww would break my heart...poor things and Im glad Inu and Miroku are at least talking a bit more, I know hes upset and I dont think he blames Inu but it must be hard for him to think of that..my poor babies...and that dad of Rins..shudders..hes scary...bet ya he tried to hurt Rin.easeease please please dont let Naraku find Rin and make her into one of his whores...omg thats whats going to happen huh?? but then Sesshy will come and fall in love and take them all away right?? *one can dream* anyhow whose the lady that Inu has to sleep with??? I read your comment to the reviews and you have me wondering ooh please dont let it be Kikyo..but then again I can seee her paying for it..no one wants her..yes Im a o hao hater sowwy..anyhow enough babbling great chap hope you update soon..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
person kawaiikitsune
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
kooooooooooooooooooooooooool! i liek the 'man-whore' idea! lol ^_^;eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeerrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyyyyyy goooooooooooooooooooooood fiiiiiiiiiiiiiiic! e-mai me if u put another chappy up pwease!
person Julia eat cow
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's so sad T_T... I don't like M/M either, but the whole plot of it is really good. I really hope that the Kag/Inu thing comes soon [[sigh]] Did I mention that it was sad? Poor Miroku and InuYasha :(
person Jules
schedule March 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! It is so strange to read a story where Inu isn't 'the ladies man'. It is kinda cool for him to be this vulnerable and in human form (yum yum). Can't wait to read some more.
person tigers_eye
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed. Hopefully, IY will explain the alternative was Miroku ending up w/ a set of broken legs & maybe a few cracked ribs. Kagura? That should prove interesting. Can't wait for update.
person sesshoumaru77
schedule March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it...You did good because most of the time I hate guys fucking eachother..yey!
person Subaru
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes homosexsuality is morally wrong I myself have known one gay guy and one girl. They were both good friends I myself am definatly not gay but this story is sad and well written even though it has some disgusting details. I am not flaming you but instead I think it is a great story. I cant wait for the next chapter! ^_^
person Mija
schedule March 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok what happened?? where was I when this latest of updates came up??? and three to boot...alls I can say is wow and awwwwwwwwww they hurt Miroku...why??? if Inu was the one who had held back some money why did they hurt Miroku?? that bastid...oooh I just want to hurt Naraku...shove something up his butt...ok that was crude but if anyone deserves to be violated it should be that damn pimp..yes I am mad...they hurt my poor Miroku and made my poor Inu baby do things to him and now Miroku wont talk to him...sniffles...they are best friends and they made my Inu do that to Miroku..sniffles...your doing a wonderfull job with this fic..soo sad and soo good..and slash??? I always thought that was where people hurt themselves?? like cutting??? or like death? I dont know, I havent a clue to what it means either sowwy..anyhow enough of my babbling hope you update really really soon...and btw yKaguKagura is going to teach my Inu about what a woman likes??? ewwwwwwww well at least it aint Kikyo...wouldnt it be cool if Sesshy made it big time?? he has money and what not and finds his bro and takes him in?? get him and Miroku off the street??? sigh can wish...anyhow update soon huggles and smiles Mija..:-)