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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow I just read all 29 chapters in two days to have my face fall when I realized it wasn't complete, heh I should really be more observant.
Well I am loving this story so far, it’s so dark but so realistic and the emotions in it are some of the most powerful I've ever seen written.
I do have to commend you for your writing talents as well and how well you've shaped the characters. The pace has been slow but because of that it’s believable, so I like how steady things progressed.
I would love to hear more inner dialogue now that they have a chance to lead a normal life, no doubt that won’t be easy but I’m glad they at least all have the chance at a happy ending.
I hope you have the chance to update soon and I’m really looking forward to reading more chapters for this. Great job, wonderful story.
Well I am loving this story so far, it’s so dark but so realistic and the emotions in it are some of the most powerful I've ever seen written.
I do have to commend you for your writing talents as well and how well you've shaped the characters. The pace has been slow but because of that it’s believable, so I like how steady things progressed.
I would love to hear more inner dialogue now that they have a chance to lead a normal life, no doubt that won’t be easy but I’m glad they at least all have the chance at a happy ending.
I hope you have the chance to update soon and I’m really looking forward to reading more chapters for this. Great job, wonderful story.
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October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank god you updated! i've been so worried about all of them. how will things go now? i'll bet inu is feeling guilty. poor guy.
can't wait to see more!
can't wait to see more!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much I nominated it for a inuyasha_fanfic_fanart guild Best Yaoi award. Good Luck.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Been a while since I've reviewed but this is still as well written as ever.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm sorry that I have not been reveiwing. I forgot what the name of the fic was for a while, but now I'm happy to see that Inuyasha, Rin and Miroku are with Sesshoumaru now. I hope that everyone has a happy ending.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I only read the first chap but I wanted to leave a comment.
That was one of the most heartbreaking, realistic, no holds
barred fiction I have ever read. It brought tears to my eyes
because being in NYC, i can't tell you all the times I've seen
that VERY sight, particularly during the winter.
I remember one night inparticular...I was with my friend, we were
coming from seeing a movie. We crossed 14th st/10th ave & saw
a young guy with tight blue jeans & a motorcycle jacket. He was
leaning against a streetlight and he looked so very cold...
I was a bit naive at the time. I told my friend, "it's freezing, why
is he out here like this?" and she goes "Because he's selling his
ass." She didn't mean it in a nasty way, that's just the way she
talks. I swear it took alot for me not to cry.
Stuff like that breaks my heart. No one, especially a kid should
have to survive that way. I know i'm rambling :-D
But I just wanted you to know that you really got to me with this.
I will definitely leave more reviews as i continue.
That was one of the most heartbreaking, realistic, no holds
barred fiction I have ever read. It brought tears to my eyes
because being in NYC, i can't tell you all the times I've seen
that VERY sight, particularly during the winter.
I remember one night inparticular...I was with my friend, we were
coming from seeing a movie. We crossed 14th st/10th ave & saw
a young guy with tight blue jeans & a motorcycle jacket. He was
leaning against a streetlight and he looked so very cold...
I was a bit naive at the time. I told my friend, "it's freezing, why
is he out here like this?" and she goes "Because he's selling his
ass." She didn't mean it in a nasty way, that's just the way she
talks. I swear it took alot for me not to cry.
Stuff like that breaks my heart. No one, especially a kid should
have to survive that way. I know i'm rambling :-D
But I just wanted you to know that you really got to me with this.
I will definitely leave more reviews as i continue.
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September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Compelling and deep. I'm just amazed
at the realism in this story. I think Sess
would have had a harder time getting
Rin & miro...but other than that...wow.
I REALLY hope you update soon. PLEASE
e-mail me when you do. This is a story
i'm patiently waiting for.
InuGrrrl
at the realism in this story. I think Sess
would have had a harder time getting
Rin & miro...but other than that...wow.
I REALLY hope you update soon. PLEASE
e-mail me when you do. This is a story
i'm patiently waiting for.
InuGrrrl
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July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I', so glad you updated! I feel so bad for rin & miroku, but for some reason I didn't mind the incest. I hope everyone can heal with a little help from their loved ones. And I hope kikyo doesn't pop up during the healing process-_-;;
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July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW that was some dark shit....update soon
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July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed that chapter.... I'm so happy that they have gotten away from Naraku..... Is Kagome and Inuyasha relationship really going start now?!? Hope so....