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No! Please! please! please! please! PLEASE!!!!!! Don't give on your fic, I've really been enjoying your story. Your two fics might be a little similar here and there but you even credited Loveswhore for the basis! There are so many Inuyasha stories similar to each other with the same plot and more. The most popular I think are the ones where Kagome is asleep and she goes ‘into heat’ or is having a hot dream about Inuyasha and then he either has sex with her or runs off to...’take care of himself’, Kagome catches him and then they have sex. I’m sure these people have received similar letters as you but don’t let one comment like that stop you from writing such a great story! It’s only one persons view and they’re exaggerating. PLEASE!!! I need to see an ending for this fic!!! You have many fans who support you and want you to continue!! Don’t give up!!!! PLEASE!

First Off Fallen angel you should contiune this story. Alot of Fanfiction writers seem to think that their idea's are somehow copyrightable. Idea's in Fanfiction are not copyrightable plain and simple if you want to verify this go to Resources and Read FAQ's. For you to be considered ripping off a fic is if you burrowed text from the story not the idea. SO CONTIUNE IT PLEASE!!!

Like, NO! It's like we all take insperation(?) for stories, especially those of INUYASHA. Who hasn't quoted a line, or action and such right out of the original story line? I've read some that have taken whole sections from the story itself adding bits into it here and there, which I don't really care for because once you see the show, I don't always want to read ti. BUT... I tried looking up the story that you say you were inspired by and couldn't find it, so I can't say what's what really. You did give credit to the other story. I've seen stories where people took the entire story and just put their name on it!

I went back through the reviews and I only found the one flame. Of course I didn't go through every one thoroughly, but as long as they either said great, more, please I skipped them. In other words...YOU CAN"T DO THIS TO US!!! Since you say that this story plots is all yours, then keep on writing. You've done enough chapters that I believe (If you used some things before) that you have a bit of knowledge of your own to visualize 'what happens' and be able to write about it. Go back through. Look at your wonderful reviews. Remove Chapter 10. Write this 'damn' story, and repost Chapter 10 with a real chapter.

Oh, I am not a Kikyo lover. I'm into Inu/Kag, Mir/San, Sess/Rin as matching pairs. I hope that you don't use her to be InuYasha's sex toy. It gives me shivers to think that, but then Kagome is too sweet to be purchasing him. Course I cobe wbe wrong. Maybe Kagome (and I think you've made her 'uptown') needs to do a report on male prositution and has to 'rent' him.

I know, I know...reaching, huh? Well, he's already given his virginity to the other witch.

Also, poor Rin. t det devil's gonna have something done with her. Hope Sess comes to help. (I love him -- oh I said that out loud)

Well...see got me started again and I wrote a ton! Please don't drop this. Do your thing.

awwww please dont drop

I normally don't bother to review, but I'm making an exception here. I have been reading this story from the beginning, and have been hooked, as many others are. I can understand how a person could be upset when others steal their story and just insert different names and different sequences for the events. I've had that happen to me years ago on one of my old websites. (Only difference was the person copyed/pasted my story, changed the names, and didn't bother to change anything else. The person then sent it to me to post on my web site as his/her own "original" story, since I was accepting reader submissions. Needless to say, I wasn't happy, though admittingly amazed at the stupidity of that move)

Anyway, but as you've said, you did not copy and paste the story, merely used it for inspiration. (and with no other source of information on the subject, there were bound to be similarities) At least you were courteous enough to credit the original source of your inspiration.

I am responding because I would hate to see such a great story go unfinished. I hope you will reconsider your decision.

Oh....And see! When I started writing MY review on your decision, there was only one other posted that was crying NOOOO! By the time I got mine up there were already several begging! So does that help? PLEASE! I was embarrassed to ever write a review the first time, but I'm hooked on your story too. I WANT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER AND THE NEXT, AND THE NEXT --- Got the idea yet? We're going to bug you more to write than to take it down! Do you really want me to be writing that much??!

so your just givip hup huh?
let me tell you something as long as its not copied word for word its not plagarism look up plagarism and copywrite laws and then tell them what for
for gods sake dont quit the fic i like it

I'm glad your not going to let some major jerk who can't see that its just a story upset you and that you will continue it.I myself have enjoyed it and can't wait for the next chapter (its in the favorite box in my computer).Though everyone has their own opinion, never let them stop you from anything you want to do.Your a good writer and should keep it up.I'm an artest myself and am under constant eye balling,it just takes some getting used to as long as you never lose yourself it will remain fun.

Kerry aka Comicfancat

Great story! Please don't quit the story! Forget about the stupid flamers! You have more people who enjoy the story then you people who don't. Flamers are just immature adults who like to pick fights for no reason. Please keep going, this is my favorite story!

After reading this FABULOUS story, and skimming the the dozens and dozens of rave reviews, I figured I would add in my two cents-worth at last.

*ahem*

PLEAASE please PLLLLEEEEEEEEZE don't drop this story!! * sobs, crawls on ground, begging* Pretty please?? with lots of yummy candy on top???!!!?!?!