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FLAMESSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!! FROM!!!!!! ME!!!!!!!!! BUt the good kind LMAO!!!! Hahaha...ok um so yea I like this this is awsome. SOOOOOOOO GOOOOOOOOOODD!!! I have been angry the entire fic wantin kic kick some major toosh but um thats a good sign good writing usually evokes emotion in some form or fashion. Great WORK!! EXCELLENT JOB!!!! Tooo danm good for words!!!! Five stars????? Hell how about teeeeeen!!! Ok so yea IM a bit hyper. Hope ya can use the flames though maybe roast a marshmellow(SP???) Some how I think I spelled that wrng. DAMNED CHARDONAY FINGERS.


Until your next update I will not bathe, eat, sleep I wil simply day in and out stare at my screen like this


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So um hurry up ^___^

The only souce of information I had for this story concerning male prostitution was The only way I know by love's whore. I have no idea what male prostition is like and yes, I did say that I got the idea for the story from her. The storyline is mine and mine only. I may have use a couple of words from her story but I don't know any other way of writing a particular scene concerning what male's do in this situation. I did acknowledge that that is where i got the idea from but I did not "cut and paste" any of her story. The plot is all mine. But if I begin to get hassled by readers, I am dropping it so you wI doI don't like
getting flames. So I will drop the story. Happy?

Fallen Angle

It's ME AGAIN. See, what did I tell you? You have 110 reviews. 108 of them are great reviews! 1 if your comment, and there is ONLY 1 flame! I saw that someone else managed to find the story and do what I was going to (without luck), but they said that it was as this other person said and I'm going to go with that!! Everyone out here is dying... so cure us! All of us that write are going to take some heat or put down at one time or other. There's a story on this sight that I started reading and it seemed like a lead up to a story of mine, with my idea, and I have to admit that it shocked me a bit, but as I read the next time they posted, even though it was similar of the idea and major theme, the story was still different. It was like my story inspired theirs. I still felt a little out though, because that was one of my most brilliant peices (or I thought so) and now someone was using the idea too, but that's what stories are. IDEAS and feelings of the writer. I would grieve if someone actually 'took' my stories, but all I could really do was think my writing inspired them to do their story.

See I told you I'd write alot. Hopefully you will reconsider your decision. AND SOON. It's like jus just about every other reviewer has said: your story involves you with a lot of thought afterwards as to what their going through, especially knowing that they KNOW that this is not THEM inside. That just because they do this, doesn't make them 'that way'. And I could see the twos predicument as to what they're feeling after being helped to enjoy it. THAT would raise a lot of thought of themselves and like you write, it would make them feel ashamed.

Please continue the writing of YOUR story. We need some (good) closure on them, (even though I know life out there doesn't end in 'happily ever afters' in the real world). I've hurt enough in my life that I can feel very deeply when a writer writes a story captivating enough to stir up a responding ache (sympathic feelings) to what that character is going through. With your story, I've felt like going out myself, grabbing one of these guys off the street or whatever, take them to a nice room, give them a decent meal, see if there is really something I can do to help them 'escape'. (YEAH, about as easy getting a battered woman away from her husband or boyfriend). But you have definately stirred up something.

I hope that you write a good ending, because I want to read that. I want to see the characters I love make it work out, because sometimes I became one of those characters myself while reading and I would want it that way. (Don't quote you don't always get what you want - I know that too well already)!

So unless you want me to keep this up. WRITE A NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!

OK people did it to me again. So they added a few more reviews before I got mine up again, so people don't grip with the numbers I have claimed on my last review!

I was really enjoying the fic. I'm sorry that people can be cruel. I would to read the end of it.

You shouldn't listen to ignorant people. Besides, you already explained about using that other persons story as a guide so, other people should learn how to read the small print, which in this case was the author's note at the very beginning of the story. I myself haven't read that story and find yours to be rather interesting itself. You should keep going. Unless the author of the fic you basedrs ors on has a problem with it then other people should just back off and let you be. If they don't like it then they don't have to read it. There's plenty of other fics out there. Besides, are they going to go pick at everybody else's fics and say that they're copying too? There's alot of fics that are pretty close in plot and style and most of that's accidental. There's only so many things a person can do before it's all been done. Don't get discouraged yet. You write really good! :)

I really miss this story awhole lot! i really do wish you would keep writing this wonderful story. i mean alot of people love this story aswell. and i really do hope u keep going. you a great writer, and your doing wonderful too. please i beg of u keep writing :(.

OMG nooooo! Please don't do that! I really like this story, and I say that with nothing but true emotions. This story speaks to me on so many levels. So please, please do not drop this story.

Just because someone gets a bee up their ass and they have to insult writers does not mean you should curb your creative streak. You credited the story you used for your ideo plo please, please please rethink this.

I am sure that you will get many other posts with this same reaction, so please, think it over again...

creeps................................ i really liked this story alot and i mean alot. why does some jerk have to come mess it all up for the rest of us who really like this story. that bastard as InuYasha would say :) but i think u should keep writing this story it's really good i mean really really really really good and i wanna keep reading it and enjoying to to find out what happends and see if InuYasha and Kagome meet and InuYasha can be happy. but just blow that person off and keep writing this great story. thanx and please just think about it and keep writing. i mean alot of people like this story and one person one person has to write say you totally copy *kinda sounds like i'm back in the 5th grade*. blow that person off please i beg of u *down on hands and knees* hehe. just think about it please. thanx so much!

no no no dont drop the story!!! its so good....ive been enjoying the story a lot and i would like to know what happens next....so please, please dont drop the story....