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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story today and I , for one, am glad that you are not scrapping this story because of those silly little flames. I am SOOO hooked on to this story! Where's Sesshoumaru? Is he going to be added? Anyway, I love this fic! So PLEASE post more soon!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really do like your story. Fuck whoever accused you of copying and pasting. -____- It's really not worth it getting mad at the retard cause there are plenty of other things better in life like... reviews from your loyal readers [such as myself ^_^], olatolate, food, and other stuff I can't think of right now, but it's there. ^_^ I really hope you continue this story!
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just knew it had to be Kikyo. She better not hurt Inuyasha. And yeah Sess for trying to find Inuyasha. He should feel very ashamed of himself. I'm afraid for Rin because Naraku probably knows where she is. I'm biting my nails. Please hurry with another update.
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow..three whole chaps..sowwy I lagged havent been reading or reviewing..sigh..sorry..but anyhow oooh man those chaps were totally awsome..and omg Inu turned Kagura on?? hehe he must have a really nice umm package..hehe and omg poor Miroku when is that bastid Naraku going to just leave him the heck alone??? poor Miroku and Koga?? ooh well if Inu had to have someone might as well be Koga, he was at least gentle and stuff with Inu and he felt for him on some level which was totally cool..but omg omg omg soo Naraku knows Rins ther ooh ooh man and hes going to have Hiten do something to her isnt he?? grrrrrrrrrrrr really really want to hurt Naraku..badddddlllyyyy, just let me at him for five minutes I'll make him cry like the sissy la la he is..bastid...ok ok done venting..hehe..and whats this about flames??? ooh man just let the flames go gf they aint worth the grief they seem to inflict on people...lots of my dear freinds who are totally awsome writers here get flamed and it hurts them still and if I could Id let everyone of them eat thier words..I mean really...is it just me or do flames have any real inteligance behind them?? if ya dont like a story dont review simple no??? if ya have some critism that you think might help then by all means most authors like that..but just plain out being mean and rude is just nonesense..sigh ok this is a touchy suject for me..and I guess ya can tell huh?? ooh well...I stand by what I say..anyhow glad your continuing I like this fic..till next chap huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
omg I just knew it was Kikyo...lmaoooooooooo, she would have to pay for it the slut...ok ok dont like her and did not want to see her with my INU buttttt just knowing she has to pay to have him makes me feel better hehe...and omg omg Sesshy is looking for Inu??? awwwwwwwww and he sounds like hes really realy concerned..awwwwwwwwwww I hope he finds him fast, finds him and helps him and Miroku before Naraku gets his hands on Rin..grrrrrrrrr......and soo Kags is thinking of cute little Inu too huh?? hehe who wouldnt hes a hunk...but soo is Miroku and Im still hurting because they just keep hurting Miroku the bastids.....sigh..great chap glad your continueing hope to read another one ...:...:-) huggles and smiles Mija..:-)
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad to see you're going to continue to work on this story, because it's a really good one. I really like how you wrote Kouga in this story - too many people write him as such a huge jerk and I don't know where they get that from, 'cos I don't think he's a jerk at all. I think you got him pretty spot-on :) And I love the fact that he's in this story in the first place! :D
Can't wait to see what Naraku does about Rin... *frets* What a cliffhanger!
And I thought your lemon was really good... especially for a first time! I didn't think it wasl atl at all, so no worries :)
Can't wait to see what Naraku does about Rin... *frets* What a cliffhanger!
And I thought your lemon was really good... especially for a first time! I didn't think it wasl atl at all, so no worries :)
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love the way you've writen it. It written much better then my works of Sasha do to my tendencey to hold back on my works least they be dark too or too antsy. you're doing really well this well i have decided to either work harder on my ORIGNALS discontinue them.Bthe way, i really this story.^_^
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh... and this message is for the person calling themselves FALLEN (the one who keeps flaming Fallen_Angel):
You're an asshole. Not because you have some criticism about this story, but because you're a condescending JERK. Comparing us all to the fans on the AS boards? Accusing us of only liking this story because it has InuYasha characters in it? Come on. You've made your points - now STOP BEING A PRICK. Seriously. You're not coming off like the bigger person here - YOU'RE the one coming off like a petty child throwing a tantrum.
And newsflash for you, honey... EVERYTHING has already been done. Do you really think this precious fan fic (can't remember the name) you're claiming Fallen_Angel has "copy and pasted" is the first fiction EVER written about male prostitution? Do you think it's the ONLY story with a remotely (or vastly) similar plot-line? If you honestly think that, you're not that bright. EVERYONE is inspired by SOMETHING. Some of the most entertaining fan fictions I've seen have been based off of other stories or movies or what-not. I don't really care WHERE a story gets inspiration from, so long as it's a well-written story and I'm enjoying reading it.
So come off your high horse and stop trying DESPERATELY to ruin everyone's fun. I mean, seriously. You insult the story we're all enjoying, you insult the author of said story, you insult all the readers, you insult our reasons for enjoying it... What's next? Fire-bombing the building where the AFF servers are located, so the whole site goes down? Just stop being a damn killjoy. You had your say. You made your points. And hey... We just don't give a crap - Which should be BLATANTLY obvious, but you seem to be too dense to catch on. So there it is, in black and white, just for you.
Now go away.
You're an asshole. Not because you have some criticism about this story, but because you're a condescending JERK. Comparing us all to the fans on the AS boards? Accusing us of only liking this story because it has InuYasha characters in it? Come on. You've made your points - now STOP BEING A PRICK. Seriously. You're not coming off like the bigger person here - YOU'RE the one coming off like a petty child throwing a tantrum.
And newsflash for you, honey... EVERYTHING has already been done. Do you really think this precious fan fic (can't remember the name) you're claiming Fallen_Angel has "copy and pasted" is the first fiction EVER written about male prostitution? Do you think it's the ONLY story with a remotely (or vastly) similar plot-line? If you honestly think that, you're not that bright. EVERYONE is inspired by SOMETHING. Some of the most entertaining fan fictions I've seen have been based off of other stories or movies or what-not. I don't really care WHERE a story gets inspiration from, so long as it's a well-written story and I'm enjoying reading it.
So come off your high horse and stop trying DESPERATELY to ruin everyone's fun. I mean, seriously. You insult the story we're all enjoying, you insult the author of said story, you insult all the readers, you insult our reasons for enjoying it... What's next? Fire-bombing the building where the AFF servers are located, so the whole site goes down? Just stop being a damn killjoy. You had your say. You made your points. And hey... We just don't give a crap - Which should be BLATANTLY obvious, but you seem to be too dense to catch on. So there it is, in black and white, just for you.
Now go away.
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March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story.....Flamers are mean ...i cant wait to read more on it .Keep up th egood work ^.^
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March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's not fair T_T An awesome story and it is being abandoned. As long as you are not copying word for word, I do not see the problem. I thought every one had the right to do their take on an idea. Some people are just so shallow *grr* Well, if you do ever continue the story here on AFF, I'll be keeping an eye out for it. Truly enjoyed the story. It was so refreshing to read a story where Inu was not "all that". Again, yourry wry was AWESOME and I am sorry that you won't be continuing.