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for Dirty Life

by Strawberries

person Reviewer #34321
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You were gonna scrap this story?!?!?!?! Oh man, if you did, there would be some serious hell to pay! I LOVE THIS! Even though the characters aren't real, the situation of this whole 'male prositution' seems like it would really happen!

Never, EVER scrap this story--until your finsihed the last chappie and that I have read it



Well, conitnue onwards! I want to see if Inu/Kag get hitched! LOL!

Keep on Writin'
Reviewer #34321
person Supercool
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I would First like say that I am glad you are contiuning this story you have done nothing wrong, you probaly never should have given her any credit because when they see because it doesn't matter that it is a different plot or their differnt chtersters all they see it that it is complete somebody else as for the flamers you got one author who has sixteen reviews on a story is good but she had to find a source for her to write I mean she is a woman and she is writing about Male protustion so it was a diuloted form of somebody else is work so she is a hypocrtie in mine opininon and you 142 postive reviews to 3 negative meaning what fan backing they have. They are just jealious of your success on a different story. They sound like 7 yr old girls whinning to a teacher because you got a better grade then they did. Please post more soon you ha gra great backing and we love you!!!
person Numisma
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
another excellent chapter. i cannot wait to see how well Sessy fares in his search.
person the friend of loveswhore
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HI, I am a personal friend of loveswhore, you put her name as Love's whore, and she just found out about this story March 17 by a fan of hers who was kind enough to tell her. She came to me and explained the story. I read it. The Inuyasha characters are a nice touch. Neither Her or I have anything against Inuyasha or fanfiction, but... You took the ORIGINAL characters, and made them into Inuyacharcharacters, you took those characters and actually kept the ORIGINAL characters roles,and the ORIGINAL story line.

"This is an idea that I came up with from reading The Only Way I know by Love's whore" An idea is an ORIGINAL concept not something that you tand pnd put a new spin on it. You have no idea how many HOURS it took her to write this story and shorten it for this site. The ORIGINAL story was wayyy longer, and indepth, I guess you'll never know the whole story, huh? I do I go over her house and read it.

If you only knew how she feels toward this...story of yours. She is considering to stop all of her writing, and what would that do to all of her fans. And you know what's funny her first story published is your firstry pry published...kinda. You didn't get her permission to do this sort of thing either, and if you would have asked, honestly, she would have said no because she has worked hard actually researching and perfecting it.

If the people that are reading this story actually enjoys the story line and the characters, I can't stress this enough, read the ORIGINAL STORY.

Not to say that you are a BAD writer, you are good. I am not going to lie. But you could have at least TRIED TO ask her about it. When she reviewed your story...let's put it this way, computers and sarcasm don't mix, except *sigh* you are a good writer
person InuKagome17
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is amazing and thrilling, it it leaves me on the edge of my seat with those cliffys [>>].The flame,s ignore them, all good writers always have flames, but your story is awesome, and when more people, who are jealous, reliaze that, youll get alot more complements.Keep up the gret writing!
person Kari
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o my gosh, i'm so glad u updated! i can't wait to read more hehe* hope u update again soon!
person friend of loveswhore
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
To supersoul, that is absoulutly not the point! It doesn't matter about the reviews or the hits if it did loveswhore would have said so...trust me i know. Besides it is in the original catogory compaired to fanfiction it will not get enough attention as it should. I myself am guilty of that. loveswhore knew that it wouldn't but she put it up anyway. the thing is she feels betrayed because nothing was asked of her. point blank.
person loveswhore
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
check the challenge box you been served. I'm not jealous, I'm just mad. So respect for being honest. I hope the fans enjoy this turn of events. Break a finger hun. ^_^
person Hillary
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its kikyo I know it I wanted it to be kagome waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
person loveswhore
schedule March 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Not an angry note this time i have cooled off. i just wanted you to go back to the challenge section and see the note and review i have posted. It's not mean I promise.