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Agree w/ previous viewers--definitely need chapter 15. I was wondering if you would consider having IY raped. I know from watching crime shows such as Cold Case Files & America's Most Wanted that this is an "occupational hazard" in this kind of "work"--not to mention getting killed, as well. I also have to admit, I'm something of an "rape IY" fan. Anyway, just something to consider. Keep up the excellent story.

I love this story so much! It's a lot better than some of the others I read! Keep up the good work!

When in the bloody heck are you gonna to update? This is a good story!

omg please post chapter 15 soon. I can't wait to see who hired inuyasha for the weekend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! please update sooon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I hope you update again soon! I'd lost this story and couldn't remember the name for anything, but I finally managed to locate it again today. Yay! ^_^ But Inuyasha and Kagome still haven't really met yet. I was hoping that after my long lapse in keeping track of the story, they would have. But hopefully when you post the next chapter they will! Until next update! (And yes, I really WILL be back, because I got some sense and bookmarked it, heh)

Great story, so many twists and turns! Earlier in the story to said that if you bring Sesshomaru and this that he will be paired up with Rin, but in this story isn't Rin around 12 or 13? (Miroku said that she was two years younger than him and I am guessing he is the around the same age as InuYasha) Wouldn't that kinda be....weird because of the age difference? Sesshomaru as to be at least over 18 in the story because it he can drive and drink at a bar...but he could be a sneaky little boy and use a fake ID for the drinking part...^__^! Oh well I guess I will just have to wait and see what happens! lol.

And another thing... IS INUYASHA AND KAGOME EVER GONNA MEET???????? lol. Again, I guess I will just have to wait and see what happens. lol.

Well keep up the good work and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Nora Wall

This is not my typical style fic, but it has held my attention far longer than most do anymore. It's very well written and while the subject matter is very disturbing I like the characters (at least the ones I'm suppose to like) and really want to continue reading. So good job! You've managed to write a very compelling story, PLEASE continue it soon.

This is not my typical style fic, but it has held my attention far longer than most do anymore. It's very well written and while the subject matter is very disturbing I like the characters (at least the ones I'm suppose to like) and really want to continue reading. So good job! You've managed to write a very compelling story, PLEASE continue it soon.

Wow..! This is a great piece of fiction! The storyline is not something you see done very often (if at all) so the originality is there. I mean, you can only read so many High School fics or Inuyasha fooling with Kikyo so Kagome runs away-fics before growing tired of the subject. It's certainly a chocking and disturbing subject matter, and I'm glad to see that you aren't trying to sugarcoat it too much. I'm glad to see that the boys have some of their fire and caring personalities intact still. They are pretty strong boys. Hopefully Kikyo won't be too cruel to Inuyasha, but the fact that she requested a bondagesession is kind of hinting towards what she likes in bed, and it's probably not champagne and rosepetals.
As disgusting and disturbing as the subject of this fic is, I absolutley love it! It's easy to get sucked into the story, leaving you wanting to find out what will happen next. The things I'm a bit curious about is how the girls and boys are going to get to know eachother more. They don't seem like the types to use prostitues and the boys have a pretty hectic schedule. And if they fall inlove (which is very likely considering the attraction they have towards eachother) how is that going to work out? No girl will feel very good at finding out they are inlove with a prostitue I imagine but if they get passed that, there is still the major problem of Naraku owning the boys. If they run away then Naraku is probably going to do his best to get them back, and as demonstrated with Rin he won't like them having girlfriends. It would be too terrible if he got Kagome and Sango to work for him aswell.. And how is Sesshomaru going to free his little brother? Will he even want him back after the life he's lived? I hope so. Oooh, I'm just burning with a need to find out what's going to happen!
Enough with me thinking out loud here :) It's seriously a great fic and you shofeelfeel proud of yourself for it. I'm hoping to see the plot thicken soon :)
Looking forward to the next chapter. Until then, take care :)
/Shjo

Man what a mess up life. Poor Inuyasha I hope Sesshomaru finds him soon. I bet Sesshomaru going to be Rin's client. Please update soon.