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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That is one of the best stories that I have read. OMG!ase ase update as soon as you can!!!!!! Thanks!
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October 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
love the story, hope Miroku, Rin and Inu are able to do the 2 hours without actually going all the way....maybe Ses will ask for them to prove how good they are at bringing off their customers without actually going all the way.
sigh....I hope this DOESN'T end up being a Ses/Rin fic....I really hate that combo (it creeps me out) Can handle Ses with most of the others.....Kagura, Sango, Kagome...but not with Rin. Too bad Rin can't ask for Kagura to be thrown in as well.....oh well....Naraku would probably balk at that anyway....would really like to see Ses with Kagura though (she's more his equal...and classier than Rin)
of course if Rin is able to convince Ses to ask for Kagura too...and Naraku is willing to give her up as well....perhaps they can all go all the way with Kagura and that way Rin wouldn't have to be worried about 'doing it' with Miroku...(well....customers do usually come for the females so two female employees would make sense)
sigh....I hope this DOESN'T end up being a Ses/Rin fic....I really hate that combo (it creeps me out) Can handle Ses with most of the others.....Kagura, Sango, Kagome...but not with Rin. Too bad Rin can't ask for Kagura to be thrown in as well.....oh well....Naraku would probably balk at that anyway....would really like to see Ses with Kagura though (she's more his equal...and classier than Rin)
of course if Rin is able to convince Ses to ask for Kagura too...and Naraku is willing to give her up as well....perhaps they can all go all the way with Kagura and that way Rin wouldn't have to be worried about 'doing it' with Miroku...(well....customers do usually come for the females so two female employees would make sense)
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October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Goodness... It seems you have no way to free Inuyasha and Miroku from having to DO eachother again, and about Rin.... OH GOSH... I really dunno what to say... If there's no way around, I'd say let Miroku do Inuyasha this time, so Inuyasha does Rin and Miroku wont have to disgrace his sister that way. It's only reasonable... JUST MY THOUGHTS though... do as you wish... if you do make Miroku do something to her, I just hope it's not penetration, that would leave both scarred for life. Like I said, it's your choice, I BACK YOU UP ALL THE WAY> Keep writing... you're really good...
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HELLO!!!!!!!!
I'M REVIEWING..... YAY go me. Anyways.... I love your story. It is very original and you are talented. I love this story. If you wouldn't mind and reviewing some of my stuff. I have 8 stories. I know i know thatot. ot. I'm not asking for you to review all i mean if you wanna you can but maybe you could read one and tell me what ya think. I'd love you foever. Anyways the names of them are.... The Dare, The Monk Ball, Endings, College Days, One Last Wish, Karate Hanyou, Model Attraction, and Lovers United. Ok thats all for now. Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON. C ya. ::BLOWS KISSES::
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I'M REVIEWING..... YAY go me. Anyways.... I love your story. It is very original and you are talented. I love this story. If you wouldn't mind and reviewing some of my stuff. I have 8 stories. I know i know thatot. ot. I'm not asking for you to review all i mean if you wanna you can but maybe you could read one and tell me what ya think. I'd love you foever. Anyways the names of them are.... The Dare, The Monk Ball, Endings, College Days, One Last Wish, Karate Hanyou, Model Attraction, and Lovers United. Ok thats all for now. Keep up the good work and UPDATE SOON. C ya. ::BLOWS KISSES::
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October 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. When I first read it, I was shocked. I never pictured a story line like this one. But this is a really good story and the last chapter was the greatest. Although, I can't picture Rin with anyone but Sesshomaru. And it seems that she has to be with Inuyasha. Because there is no way she would be with her own brother. Ts a s a scary though. But I'm sure you will make up for it. Looking forward to the next chapter. *~LunaStar~*
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic! Thanks for the updates! You've got my attention and then some with this story though it is nothing like I usually read... and that's a complement by the way. Keep up the great work.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You know, I just read a lot of Loveswhore’s "The Only Way I Know" and I really didn't see anything beyond the male prostitution that was the same. Maybe it's just me, but your story isallyally original from where I'm sitting. Again, good work.
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September 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwww! this might be a dirty life but that was one cute e ^_e ^____^.
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September 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aww! this is great! i hadn't even thought about rin being the one sesshoumaru went to see! (shocked)
i sent you that email, and i apologize. it wasn't very nice of me, ne? although i tried to be nice! ^^' his his is a great update and i can't wait for more! update soon!
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
i sent you that email, and i apologize. it wasn't very nice of me, ne? although i tried to be nice! ^^' his his is a great update and i can't wait for more! update soon!
ja ne!
~hanyou-elf
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September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor, poor boy... You know, I'm finishing law school, and last friday we were to go visit some teen prision. But the day before, some gangs whom was there went into a fight and seven boys were killed. I think that was the reason why this chapter made me feel so depressed. I love this story and I the way you show that bad side of life. I hope Inu luck will be better.
Big hugs from Brazil,
Lere
Big hugs from Brazil,
Lere