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for Dirty Life

by Strawberries

person Marlemon
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!! You updated! I check back fairly regularly and I was SOOOOO happy to see a new chapter! I can't wait for more. YAY! Happiness!
person I Love Twins!
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome fic!

But I agree with anon, you should get Kouga back in there sometime!

^_^^_^ - (I Love Twins!)
person tigerseye
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see you're back. Was really getting worried you'd lost interest in the story. Please continue. One of my favorites, which I think I already mentioned. Welcome back!
person Moon&Stars
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!!!!! I just loved this chapter! I just really wish you would update sooner.... It seems like I wait forever for an update but you deliver the goods!!! I hope the next chapter will br just as good. Thanks for updating!
person Lea
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my... That... that made me cry. It's beautiful. I love this one fic. I just came home from school when I started reading this. I was all stressed out and whatnot and this calmed me. Thank you; thank you for making this. Originality and creativity was greaty put in this, I can see. I love the detail, and the whole story-line. Oh, please; I beg of you to continue this. ^^

Arigato


x3 -Lea
person Zmyrra
schedule January 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An update, and wow! what an update! I love how you managed to avoid the classic trap of having them skipping around happy as can be after having had such a traumatic past. It is going to take many, many years for those kids to adjust and find some kind of peace. I love this story and I think you are a great author, not to mention brave to tackle something like this. Damn, this fic is engaging! :) Some chapters have left me feeling physically ill afterwards. I love that I can get that deeply drawn in the fic. I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
Keep up the good work!
/Zmy
person Anon
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Excellent!

I loved that chapter with Inuyasha and Kouga-- too bad Kouga never came back for a repeat. ^_~
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hurray! they get to stay together! well, most of them, anyway. willyou have sango's dad get transfered back soon? that would be awesome!
person InuGrrrl
schedule January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An update! You made my weekend.
Great chappie & again, excellent story
telling.
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that i was very skeptical at first. This was something i didn't want to imagine my two favorite
characters doing. However, i know that this stuff happens. It's sad and awful, but true.
I hope this isn't all. I really hope you continue with this. I'd really like to see the reactions and adjustments
to a new way of life for all of them. I want to see inu and kags relationship develop, as well as miroku and sango.
I also want to see sess and rin, i know its weird, cuz she is young, but still. It's there.
I want to see naraku get what he deserves. He still has the tape of miroku and rin, and Sesshy needs to get
that tape and destroy it.
i really loved sesshomaru in this story. i know he is ooc in most of it, caring for inuyasha's welfare and everything,
but i do love him in this story. He was a knight is shining armor so to speak.
please continue and keep up the good work