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LOVE IT!! omg~ i love your story do much! well i cant wait for more!.. later..

chapter 14 is intact now.


but does chapter 23 end with this as the final paragraph? : --- Inuyasha gave up and just stood there while his brother embraced him from behind. Inside, he relented and let it all go, all the anger and old pain. There was no point in keeping it now anyway. That stinging drop fell from his eye, down his cheek, then vanished. "You don't have to beg." ---


just trying to help you out.

it oculd be that the chapter just needs to be edited in the Edit Chapter Option. the thing w/ chapter 4 earlier, w/ it being cut off, happened to me w/ chapter 11 of MHH. it was due to a broken html tag.



anyway, great story, and i'm glad you are continuing to write it even though some of the material (the incest stuff, primarily) is highly controversial. the way you handle this material is quite honorable.

(runs and glomps) this is such an awesome story and i'm so glad that they are on the right path! i can't believe how awesome this story is and i am totally looking forward to more from you! i hope you update this story soon.. i don't think i can wait for very long...

the tension, angst, promising lemons...

ja ne!
~hanyou-elf

Can't wait to read more! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)

We're all holding our breaths for the next chapter... hurry up before we all pass out!

About your missing chap- check other stories that are similiar to yours- people are going into other peoples stories cutting out chapters or parts of and pasting it to their own stories in order to make themselves "better"... In other words they are jealous because you can write using your own imagination... and proper grasp of writing a sentence. I just finish reading the update to a story called "BadBoy" and author's chapter disappeared from her story and appeared under a different authors name on MediaMiner. She found this out and was plenty ticked off. I like your story.. It is very graphic and truthful about how male prostitutes are most often treated.(sigh... I watch lots of documentaries about practically everything) Please keep up the good work and please don't let this get you down for long.

i think chapter 14 is cut off. there were some weird scramblings going on in several people's chapters that would mess with html tags and other such things including in mine. database errors. the last thing i can read in chapter 14 is in the section right when Kagome's in the car and leaving for her vacation. could you please go check your copy of chapter 14 in the database and see what's making some of it not show up?

thanks. i'm really behind on reading this fic. damn me.

I just checked my version of chapter 14 - and it is corrupted. You're right - it must be a site problem. I hope that you find someone to give you a hard copy to make the corrctions. This is a really good story.

this is good!
please continue!
you can barely notice that part of ch. 14 is missing
(I didn't even reilize that part of chapter 14 was missing until you mentioned it)
write on!

hey this is an awsome story. though ya no what i never noticed that chapter fourteen was cut off. but now that you pointed it out it is. so yeah. updates soon. thanx

Jake.