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WHEW poor guys. Oh and BTW umm isn't it called a threesome not a three-way? Oh well....just update quickly.

this is so awesome. you've made my cry though. does their life have to be so horribly horrible? getting beaten and raped and homeless and starving? why? why? awesome story though. please, please have more soon.

OMG i had read up to chaper 5 a long time ago !! I had forgotten about this story since adultfanfiction doesnt have email updates i forget about the stories . So if you can send me an email update whenever u update i would REALLLLLLLLLYYYY appriciate it!! I love i ! its so diferent . the whol plot is crazy. damn so close to being free and he gets hurt . oh man oh man . cant wait to the next chappy!!!!!!!!!

This story kicks ass. But... How could you do that to Miroku?! He wasn't even doing anything and those bastards came up and raped him. He could've died! And him having to screw his sister and best friend for two hours infront of Sesshy and 'The evil bastard who should die but wont for some stupid reason' Thats just wrong... Its Incest!. And Sesshomaru... What in the hell was he thinking going for 7 years without checking on his brother?! If he hadn't abandoned him in the first place he never would've started whorin' so its his fault! *re-reads writing* Oops.. I guess I got a little over emotional : ). Its sad that this is really happening in real life to kids... Anyway I love you're story plz update soon! And can you plz kill Naraku? and if you're not too busy, Kikyou too because she's an evil slut bitch. : )

Are you thinking of a way so that Sess can get Rin, Miroku and Inuyasha out of
Naraku's grip before they do the deed. I hope so; update soon

Great job, as always.

Enjoyed the new chapter. Definitely leaves an opening to get the three kids out of that god-awful condition. Meant to leave a review of the prior chapter, but ran out of time. Right idea; wrong target. But then, I think I mentioned in a previous review that I'm biased w/ IY being the one in trouble. ;)

Whew....that's bad....And I'm siding with InuYasha on this one - Naraku won't care.

the was freaking amazing!

Yeah good chapter....so kewl..wats gonna happen next to the three Rin, Miroku, Inuyahsa...wat bout Inuyasha and Kagome..dum dum dum ....lol...keep updating..such a good fic