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January 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
excellent writing!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? You write fabulous lemons and I would personally like to see you write another one, but in the back of my mind, I couldn't stop thinking about how I just couldn't even want to be thinking about getting hot and dirty with our glorious fluffy-sama after being abused to the point that Kagura was... I mean OUCH! The whole concept was fabulous, but at the back of my head I just kept thinking... OUCH! Apart from that dear Arty... please write some more. Your lemon writing ability is hot, so please don't take this as a negative review... cos I did really enjoy this story ^_~ despite the OUCH factor ^_^
Peace
Peace
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey! sweet fic. i just love Sesshomaru/Kagura pairings.
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August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
heyhey
luved the story man!
luved the story man!
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August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! I LOVE IT. But one question: how in the world can I know if you've updated? Is there something like a "story alert" or whatever like there is on regular fanfiction? I can't even find out when I'm logged in. Email me if you know, thanks. :D
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March 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There is a difference between stories of love, sex, and intrigue, and stories created solely for smut. That difference being, one is written well. This one be in the latter category. You lack grammer, structure, and desired suspense. Not to mention the storyline is lacking and the character out of sync. If you want reviews, good reviews, and positive feedback, make an attempt to attract readers. There are a lot of finely written stories on this web sites. My advice is, read a few, and take some notes. ^^
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February 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
P.S. the love scene should really be more descriptive. Explain what's happening a little more poetically and detailed. That would make it moch more enjoyable to read. Also, I have seen far too many stories that distort main characters into whiny, problematic, and emotionally confused pansies who suddenly have heart and mercy. PLease do not join that crowd.
I'm not trying to make this a full-out flame, but I'm also not going to explain myself or apologize if these words seem harsh. Some contstructive critisism, if told tactfully, should be taken to heart. Good luck.
I'm not trying to make this a full-out flame, but I'm also not going to explain myself or apologize if these words seem harsh. Some contstructive critisism, if told tactfully, should be taken to heart. Good luck.
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow...WOW ^_^
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesome tell me when you update!!!!