rate_review Reviews

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I would love for you to continue this story. I just have one itsy bitsy problem with it, you used futile(as in hopeless) when you should have used fuedal(a time period much like the middle ages) if you fix this it will be a perfect story

Good fic! I wouldn't mind more.

HI! Great story!!!

Hear what. The story line was good. better than half the shit I see on this site. However, it ended to quickly. It was not very believable, and that's at a stretch. It could have been much longer, is all I'm saying.
Nevertheless, good idea. Next time, try to lengthen and make realistic the story and the characters respectively.
I mean, I know you gave a whole explanation of Inuyasha's behaviour, but Inuyasha isn't a kind, considerate sissy. He's a foul-mouthed little bastard, and that's why we all love him. Wel, me anyways. As touching as his story was, I didn't really buy it.
But 5 for imagination.
And 4 for spelling and all that shit.
But a 2 for plot progression.

Sorree, :(

continue please its an ok stroy better if it was continued

I know your pain! I don't have Microsoft word either..... Wordpad is a pain!
Neha... Inuyasha the reason your like that is cause you luber her!!!
Hehe. Cute story... Keep it up!

Stina