rate_review Reviews

omg! is this the end? i LOVED this fic! it was awesome. I dont know if i reviewed b4 but i dont thinkso. THUS, what a well written fic! seriously, this is the mot realistic protrayl of kag/inu courtship i have ever read. all the traditions seemed plausible, the reactions were great, the timing and scenes made sense, the developments in all the relationships were gradual and believeable AND your original character (the spider demon) was good! original characters are almost never good, especially in none AU fics! so impressed!!! simply, everything in this was great. But the best was the way you entered into the characters minds, to show their fears and indecision. Liked that alot! (and your lemon/lime/dreamsequences werent too bad either if you know what i mean. ::whistles::) . there are spelling mistakes but not horrible ones. you write wonderfully!!! update soon or do a sequel or another fic!

>_< A silk kimono is still not a yukata. Please, if you're going to use Japanese words, at least know what they mean and use them properly.

::hugs:: that was great. You made me happy. That was a really great way for the two of them to get together.

Arigato for the wonderful reading!!

When i read a story if by the first 2 chapters i donte. te. then i stop reading. but you got me on the first and couldn't wait to get to the next chapter. Keep up the good work.

I love this story!!

I LOVED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The story thus far is pretty darn good and keeps you on the edge of your seat for most of the time.This chapter is no different and just as well liked but Inu didn't mark her as his witch confusses me alittle,they mated in the human way I thought it only right it should be done the demon way as well.

very cool story and enjoyed alot but Inu never marked Kagome the demon way,how sad

ya know I read this on MM and I totally loved it then when I read it, but not sure is it compleate or will there be more??? Im thinking its complete cause I dont know how you can make it any better than it is now and its a perfect ending but sadly I want more..sniffles anyhow just wanted you to know that I totally loved this fic, very talented writing, very detailed and well written, it was one of my favs on MM org and I soo loved reading it again..ty ty huggles and smiles Mija..:-)

YES!!
I just love your long and fast updates on this wonderful story...
*give you a big bunch of red roses*

/Atropa