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Fucking good story, keep those chapters coming, this one rocks!

Still loving this story; it's kicking some major ass! hehe. And so is Kagome! please write more soon. I can't wait for more Mukunda/Kagome interaction. yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyy here's five gold stars! * * * * * Wow.. they're pretty =P

Well! It's about time! Thanks sooo muchan'an't wait for the next chappie. Although, I know you are unaffected by reviews. I enjoyed this story when you first posted it and I am still enjoying it. I loved the way Inu and the gang crashed the warehouse. Yre vre very descriptive and take things at a good pace. Love that you have Kouga and Sess in your story. I am anxious to read the next chapter.

Wow-- this stis ais awesome! I love a kick ass action story! hehehe. So is Kagome going to join forces with the group? I can't wait to see! I really wanna see her give Kouga a good public beating, lol. He needs to be humilitated just a lota bit more. I think that you have a really good start on this story and it's just going to keep on getting better and better with each added chapter. You had my attention after the first paragraph ( and it takes a lot to gain that, lol) . As for not having that many reviews yet, don't worry, they'll come! Even if people don't review the fact that they still come to read it back to read it again says lots. Don't worry! I love the story, if not any one, write it for me, lol. Well I just want to say congrats on a kick ass begining and I hope to read much more from you. Keep up the amazing work! ps- do you have this story on MediaMiner.org? If so I'll add it to my favorites list. Take care-- Aitu

Y'know, I'm generally not one for cop related fanfics....but I like your story thus far! I like kag kagome is a hardnosed, dedicated officer and not just some pretty girl. :)

And I also like that you'll let Inu-Kag get together (my fave couple)...I just hope that you make Inu bad ass enough to be Kagome's alpha...she seems pretty hardcon hen her own!

:) Update soon!

Wow. This is a really great story, and I really hope that you continue it. I loved the whole Kouga/Kagome angle as being police partners, and Kouga being quite lazy about it (except when it comes to persuing Kagome). Your descriptions were sometimes chilling, really getting me there into the story. I rolled my eyes along with Kagome as Kouga fell asleep right before she went in to the warehouse, and felt her pangs of fear as she was captured. Needless to say, I was pretty glad when the gang came along. I loved how you got Inuyasha to describe Sango, and got a definite chuckle out of "the girl that has more weapons than the army." I can't wait to see more of this story, and I really look forward to the introductions of Sesshomaru and Rin. Just one question though - how in the world will Kagome explain this little adventure to Captain Simmons? Or will he even find out? With Kouga asleep, Kagome can say that anything happened, unless of course, she has a guilty conscious that always makes her tell the truth. Great work!

A wonderful A/U story you got here. Can't wait until you post more soon!!!

looks promising!! will be watching for more!!