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for Mukunda

by wrathchylde

person Mia
schedule May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please post more!!!
Pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee!
person Fireminx
schedule February 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is great! I love Miroku's Australian wildlife rendition...that was priceless!!!!
person Midnight_Sparrow
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol! Well, the eyeshadow bit does sometimes seem true....
person snowfall
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yippeeeee! You updated! I laughed so hard when Miroku was giving his little narration. It was great. Now, just what was that with Rin and Sess? Mmmm? I'll have to go back and refresh my memory. Maybe I've forgotten something. I love that Sango and Miroku's relationship hasn't changed. You are keeping them all in character. Great job! Pleeeeeze update soon.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person snowfall
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So, when are we going to see more, huh?
person snowfall
schedule November 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I loved the chapter. Hope you update soon. Wanna see what kind of shit Inu gives Kag. lol

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person zelix (not logged on)
schedule October 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
About time, i love this fic and i seriously hope you can start updating faster since this is REALLY good!
person snowfall
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. It's been awhile. I'm still keeping up. I hope to have my site up soon. And, I still want to put this story up. You write it so well. Great plot too.
schedule October 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Just for that comment, I hope Kagome shows them u the the dock.
person SP777
schedule September 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Heeeyy..I like this, it kind of has a 'the Shield'/C.S.I. feel to it.

Are you a fan of cop shows?