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person unvoicedsigner
schedule March 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
im afraid i havnt read this story yet but i just wanted to say that its spelled kikyo inuyasha but you spelled kagome right ok so buh bye
person Darien852
schedule February 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two is pretty good! A little short, but pretty good nonetheless! I like this idea of a challenge! This could go one of MANY directions! You're a VERY gifted writer! Keep writing, always keep writing!

^_^ Darien
person Darien852
schedule February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
pretty damn good...i wonder what's gonna happen now that kikiyo showed up? threesome maybe? lol well, keep writin and keep up the good work!!! later! ^_^