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March 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent one-shot, very well written, would love to eead more work of yours ;)
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
thats an awsome story plz update soon ,I wanna know what happens next!!!!!!!
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This can go places! And, as is a must, Kikyo is the bad guy....girl....I like this story. Very tasteful and very well written.
Stay cool minna! From here on in, this will be fun! ^_~
Stay cool minna! From here on in, this will be fun! ^_~
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February 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! THAT WAS AWSOME! I LOVETHIS STORY!!! YOU NEED TO UPDATE ASAP...JA NE ^_^
INUYASHASGURL008
INUYASHASGURL008
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February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good write more and put Koga as her exboyfriend that want her back,and have him find out about her and Inuyasha. Have her get pregnet by Inuyasha,and have him save him say that he's not ready to be a father and that they should take a brek,but they get back together at the end. MAKE MORE LEMONS ALOT OF THEM.
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Em...
Inuyasha was such a bad boy...... tsk tsk tsk.... but that was a good quicky....
Inuyasha was such a bad boy...... tsk tsk tsk.... but that was a good quicky....
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I can't believe HE said that! That's one of the worst things a guy can say to a girl after sex... Anyway, I think u have an excellent plot here, and if u know how to develope it, it can turn into a great story... I found some grammar mistakes and I was confused in some parts, so it'd be great if u could find a beta reader or something, but that's all... Keep going the great job.
Maggz
Maggz
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
For just the first chapter this is really great. Most I/k teacher fics like this aren't written very well, it's a difficult genre to get into without making the charecters completely OOC and the situations unrealistic (even for anime). So far've've done nice job with this and I can see it turning into a worth while story. I really want to see the update soon!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooohh... that was so good... keep up the good work, review soon!
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February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You have something here and I hope that you will continue with the story. Update soon.