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by badkittie

schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lovely, lovely chapter! I especially loved the part when Inuyasha landed on Miroku! OMG! That was so damn funny! I laughed and laughed and even now I am laughing cause its so funny at what happened! I can't believe that Inuyasha farted in Miroku's face or that Sango landed on his "male assets" Oy! That was a gut buster! And Naraku....* sighs heavily * Damn bastard! I wonder what the megloma is is up to....Hmm...And Kuro...Why did he grab the Aunt? I really can't wait for that explaination! ^_^ Until next time! ^_^
person ladyamy
schedule May 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What! A cliffhanger! You dirty rotten little thing! You can`t do this to me! Oh well if you write the next chappie soon I might not kill you just maim you. Anywayz your one of my fav writers so I`m not that mad but no more cliffhangers, please! But is Naraku planning on raising Fluffy`s kid as is own but also as the carrier of the Shikon Jewel?
person The Dragon
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I have done it! All 14 chapters finally read! Huzza! ^-^
But, on to the review... I LOVE IT! Excellently wonderful story! Every bit of it! I want moreeee... *zombie drool* I think it's so sweet whenever Sess and Rin have a kid together and I commend you on your Full Youkai twist you've put with it. I hope you cover when the Pup is born, so we can all 'meet' the little-puppy baby! =D If you do do that, I can help with a name! I love creating names!... ;)
person fanaddict
schedule May 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please finish it soon.its very good do far.
person Liz
schedule May 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG! That was great! You must update soon... and if you do can you do meh a favor? Email meh please? I want to keep up with this story! It's great! Keep up the good work.

P.S i hope there is another lemon soon!

With Much love

huggles
~Liz~
person Inuzands
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aahhhh, evil cliffhanger. I am angered. Okay, not really, but I'm dying to see hap happens next! Update soon! (as if you didn't know I would say that).
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
* growls at AFF.net * damn thats the second time I lost a review to this site because its flaking out!

* calms down and returns the bow with one of her own * Thanks for the compliment! If I get anymore like that my head won't be able to fit through any doorways! ^_^ But again, thank you for the compliments, I appriciate them. ^_^
Great chapter BTW. I was wondering...When Miroku disappeared, he went through the portal ok right? Cause one second he was there and the next he wasn't! I just need to know if our favorite resident pervert is going to be ok...And about the portal. Great description on that. I thought it was cool the way you described the colors. I thought you choose the right ones to describe such and event, cause any other colors would have ed oed out of place. And I hope that Miroku is ok, and that Naraku gets his ass beaten up and good! ^_~ Until next time! ^_^
person Lavenderblue
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love your story.Please update more quickly!!
person Tejas
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was something!! leaving when the fighting was just getting started. Ready and Willing to read part two of this chapter any time. I like a big bloody mess,Yes I do. Poon ann and her pup,who will reach them first?
person Tejas
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well that was something!! leaving when the fighting was just getting started. Ready and Willing to read part two of this chapter any time. I like a big bloody mess,Yes I do. Poor Rin and her pup,who will reach them first?