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for Hard Up

by DelKaidin

person MysteryladyTx
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG...that was FANTASTIC...OMG..LOL...poor Inu-Yasha....LMAO....hehehe...that was so so GOOD:D
person MysteryladyTx
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH that was so GREAT...I LOVED it if you ever do another one please let me know:D....
THANKS:D
Erika
person Kaye
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Burst out laughiInuyInuyasha is a moron! Hahahaha. Very good second chapter. I thank who ever made you write that second chapter it was hilarious! He's such a moron!
person KagoKitty
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my god, del...what could the puppy have done to mess up a scene like that?? lol...good job. citrus the next chapter up a bit, why don't cha?? *grins devilishly* those outbursts are funny...but how coulda Kagome remember EVERY way he asked her?? *giggle* Too cute, del...just too cute!! Update soon, IhopeIhopeIhope!!
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person Gitona
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ummmmmmmm..........????+.+That sure was quite a few interesting positions and...ahem...places!!Weellll...anyways I like your story so far and I was wondering if you would please email me when u update!!Hmmmm...*imagines self with fav. character Seeshoumaru,except for the whole in front of peole part...wow so many intersting things we could try...all sound good to me..hehehehe!*^_^
person Nokomarie
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aww, hope Inu manages to line the answers up with the right questions soon. Very funny.
person drake220
schedule February 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh dear......poor inu. i supose it might be a good thing he's not into having children like miroku huh? funny chapter but honestly, how dense can that guy be?
person ~A~
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aiya, I gave myself a headache trying to match what she agreed to to what he asked. Great chapter. I love that she answered him. Too bad Inuyasha forgot or he might have gotten a treat ^_~ Please update soon, keep up the great work =)
person KitsuneNeko
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*blink...blinkblink* *LMFAO* PUH-LEEEEEEEEEASE!!!! ONEGAI ONEGAI ONEGAI!!!!! You HAFTA add another chapter!!!!! Onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai onegai!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is just WAY too funny! *gigglies* Poor Inu-chan, I imagine hitting the ground during THAT osuwari was VERY painful. oowwwww.
person myrrdinowl
schedule February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i haven't laughed so hard for a while!! is this going anywhere or is it just random amusement? LOL!!!!