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for Hard Up

by DelKaidin

schedule January 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was totally amazing!! XD

one question... why are you not writing anymore?!? you are a gifted and talented author, not using it is a crime.

thank you,
ginny
person DarkWolf
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL that was so funny XD DO MORE DO MORE!!!! ^_^"
person Snowfall
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know how it can be irritating to have readers ask for more, but...The two have discussed what they would and wouldn't do, so naturally...it would be nice to see them actually do something. Yeah, I know, you practically had your arm twisted in order to get you to write that second chapter, but without them putting words into action, the fic seems a bit unfinished. That's not meant as an insult. Please don't take it that way. I love your work. You have no idea how many times I re-read this and laughed my ass off every single time. This is just a suggestion; a selfish one to be sure. Hope I haven't been a pest.

Oh, and if you want to take out the db errors from your fics and keep them out, I've had luck with putting 'pre' in html at the top of my documents, and '/pre' at the end. You have a lot of fics, so it would be understandable if you didn't want to bother with it. Just thought I'd let you know that there is a way to keep them intact.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person InuGrrrl
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was damned funny. I think i've read all of your
work and have been pleased every time. You're very
talented!
person YoukaiFate
schedule October 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This had me grinning from ear to ear. Thank you! I needed that!
person BirdieBlythe
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh that was soooo.....wrong! Poor Inu baby...Oh how i would love to see the tables turn on kagome!*evil grin* Can't wait for more Del!
person Anon
schedule March 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
needs more chapters:-)
person caitriona
schedule December 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I had read this a long time ago from your web page, but had forgotten about it. But then it snuck up on me this morning as I was flipping through some AFF pieces I had marked to read later, and it almost made be shoot coffee through my nose. Good Job!!

Caitriona
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! You just can't leave it there! * sniffles * I wanna know what cause Kagome to 'Sit' Inuyasha! It was getting very good! ;_; Besides....Heh heh....It was funny as all hell...^_^ Until next time! ^_^
person Luna
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
goodness this is hilarious... and very funny... I do have to say that Kagome's answers were well matched to all of Inuyasha's questions..... and you have to continue... they have to resolve the issue(s)... once and for all I mean.... anyway.... how could he forget his outburst... just exactly how?