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for In too deep

by Pallas

person Piper
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I Love it! More! Make Inuyasha pay!
person A.J.
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
More! More!
person CybrEmly01
schedule February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Butcher the language all you want. We butcher it exceedingly much as it is.

Your storyline is wonderful, and I'd like it if you'd continue for as long as
you possibly can.

Ja Ne,
CybrEmly
person A.J.
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a Sessh/Kag, right? I hope so. I can't wait to see how you make Sessh's blood lust for Kagome into more. And make Inuyasha pay! I love your writing style! More!
person Jade Dragon
schedule February 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story keep up the good work. Hope you get many reviws.
This story is an Sess/kag right? I hope it is.
person feminafures
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good fic, I'm looking foward to more of your work!! LOL...Though I think Inuyasha is a total ass so far.
Ja ne
Gia
person Helen
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must admit, a good one. Some of the stories I've read on this site are mindless, plotless excuses for literature. But I like this one. It's cool. Well, the chapter I've read, anyway. I like your style of writing, and the fact that it's not just words coming together to make one long piece of shit. It makes sense.
Finally.
So, you need to hurry up with the other chapters, because I want to see how this turns out.

Peace.
person Piper
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like this fic! I want to see Inuyasha pay in some way for treating Kagome that way!
person kenji
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i hope the pairing is inu/kag. maybe you can state the pairing in the summary
person sarah
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
arrrrrrr this is so good i cant wait for more. keep up the good work and post soon