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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You are making Kagome seem weak when you make her be that way with Inuyasha. She should be horrible right back at him and act like the things he does to her don't hurt her. It's just making Sesshoumaru's acusations about her being weak seem true. I love the story though! More!
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapters pleeeeeaaaassseeee post them soon!
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for the next chapters pleeeeeaaaassseeee post them soon!
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Me so Happy! You Updated!!!!!!! Yeh! Good job! Please update again soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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March 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter! You're one of my favorite authors - the amount of times I've reread "Night has Fallen" probably qualifies for some kind of award - and I'm just thrilled that you're bringing your fabulous characterization, dark undertones and lovely descriptions over to this fandom. (Not that I wouldn't read *whatever* you write, but it helps to know who the characters are. ;)
In other words: thank you, thank you, thank you. Er, and thank you. Good job. *grins*
In other words: thank you, thank you, thank you. Er, and thank you. Good job. *grins*
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love how this story is progressing. Please continue to update!!
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February 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop there! You have to keep going! My God, you have me drooling for more!
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February 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving this story. So well written! I love this evil Sesshoumaru. I think that's how he should be. None of that wussy lovey-dovey crap. Your writting of Kagome's character is so true. It felt so real reading from her point of veiw. excellent. By far this has been 1. Entertaining, 2. enjoyable, 3. thrilling. Your spin on the Sess/Kag plot line is interesting. I eagerly wait for more.
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! Your story is very interesting even with its occasional language problems. Don't worry about it! So, you are Dutch. Do you live in the U.S.A. or do you live in Holland? Well I think you are doing fine! I doubt that I could write a story at the level of a first grader in Spanish (the language I am presently trying to learn---aargh wish I had learned it when I was a kid!) Please update soon!
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February 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oooh another good chapter...I really don't think you need a beta reader, you're doing just fine.