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for In too deep

by Pallas

person Feminafures
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Arg....what a bastard Inu is in this fic..I just wanna smack him across the head. Oh well, Kags can do fine without him,she seems to be a much stronger person now.

Keep up the good work and update soon

Gia
person yue
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohh man is inuyasha such an ass. its like a permanint PMS! dang. and a double team of deflat kagome with sessh? double dang. lol. well i enjoyed this story so far. hope u update soon.
person Shiro Ryu
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god, you updated!!!!!!!!!! I was so worried that you had given up on the story. That would have been a horrible shame! Your story is terrific and you write so well! I am so glad that you have not given up on this story! Please, please update relatively soon!!!! I can't wait to find out how Sesshoumaru reacts to Kagome being missing for a week. I also, cannot wait to see if Kagome regains her spirit.
person DragonDame57
schedule April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ooohh. is kagome gonna be spunky now? pleeaaasse let her be stronger! i like the strong version of kagome better than the weak dependant one.. ^^;; so.. wut's gonna happen with sesshoumaru now?
person Ducky
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOH! AWESOMENESS O.O I love the way you portrayed Sesshomarus personality >)! Veddy, veddy good! But, GAH ><;;; Grafunkles, Inu Yasha just need to be SHOT!! just so Im clear, is there any particular reason your portraying him like such an asshole or is this just because of the whole Kikyo situation? Anyways, if he keeps this up i can SO see how him and Kikyo were made for each other >> GAH!
person Ducky
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OHOH! And YES! I cant wait to see how Inu Yasha will pay for this!! >)
person kittycat
schedule April 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story. pleaze write more. bye bye 4 now
person Rhea
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, ppl. I don't like you very much.
This story is too damned good, and it makes my little scribblings look like Crayola markings on the walls.
Hmmph.
Or maybe I just have zero self-esteem.
Or maybe I really can't write.
Either way, I'm loving this story.
Keep it up.
Just know the second I feel good reading a chapter, you need to be worried. Then my writing will be better than yours. Trust me. That's not a good thing.
^___^
person DragonDame57
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
are you sure this is a sess/kag? cuz if i were kagome, i would never want to be with sesshoumaru after that.. ^^;; and it would be immensely hard for sesshoumaru to take back what he said.. ><;;

nontheless, i like this fic! i think it's intense and extremely emotional.. inuyasha is such a jerk.. like usual. ^^ and i like the fact you make your chapters long! =] good job!

update soon!
person Dragondame57
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
um part of my review got cut off... ><

i like this ficcie! it's intense ^^ please update soon! the way you portray kagome and sesshoumaru is awesome.