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for In too deep

by Pallas

person Deadly Teardrops
schedule April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aaaahhh!!! He kissed her!!! yayness!!! Anyway, great chapter you have here!!! please, update soon again!!!


ja ne!


DT
person LionHeart823
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow...update soon.
person jasmine
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so sad i almost cry myself. is the paring sess/kag ? i just love their fanfiction. ever though sess is so mean to kagome.
write more soon. i hope the paring is sess/kag
person Vei of Illusions
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! But you are evil to leave such a clift hanger withe Sesshoumaru. I really hope you update soon.
person crystal
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great-Inyu should be kicked in the throat amd kikyo should have her limbs severed, all by KAGOME!!!!!! sorri got a lil carried away but um yeah good job update soon! Can't wait to see what happens next.
person Levii
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Took Sesshomaru long enough! Damn arraogant bastard! I mean, I love the guy with a burning fire, but damn, is he stupid! No, not stupid, InuYasha is stupid, Sesshomaru is dense! Have Kagome stay in her original time for, however long it takes, or stay with Kaede and get her powers under control, nothing says 'Hey, you son of a bitch, I ain't weak no more!' like being able to defend yourself! I seriously hope Kikyo betrays InuYasha's ass and he feels even marginally as betrayed as Kagome. As for Sesshomaru, he better get his god damn act together, or else I'll do it for him!

Can't wait for an update, I'm absolutely loving this story!

Levii ^_^
person Ducky
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
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You know, were I come from, we have a saying for times like these. translated they would go along the lines of

WHY DONT YOU JUST STAB ME IN THE HEART??!?!?!??!?!?!?! WHY MUST YOU TORTURE US, your readers, SO?? *kneels* Have we not been good fans? Do you not love us?? *SSOOOB* Why are you so mean and why is Inuyasha such a pain in the tuckus? WHY I SAY? WHY?
person CANCAN227
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WHAT HAPPENED TO TELLING INU SIT BOY! CAUSE I REALLY ONE TO DO A COUPLE OF THOSE MYSELF.
person Mariam
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! THAT WAS SOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
You totally rule!!!!!
:D You definitely do a great job of setting the scene!! and I think your writing style is GREAT!
The story line too! The characters dont seem out of character and SESSHY!! ,.............well.. he just plain COOL! AWSOME!
::thumbs up::
PLEASE WRITE NEW CHAPIE SOON!!!!!!! PLEASEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! I will cry if its not updated soon! ;-;
person sesshouchick
schedule April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this fan fic your doing a great job please up date soon don't have me dangling on the cliff of suspense. faithful reader