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for In too deep

by Pallas

person Tami
schedule February 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I just absolutely love this one!! WOW!! Though Inu is a total bastard here(hanging around with that Kikyo bitch::Bleh::). Kagome's reaction at the kiss was great(slapping Sesshou across the face...she must be insane i would be all "Kiss me once more, Maru-chan, I'm yours!!")!! The story is "slightly" depressing, but absorbing as hell!! I WANT MORE!!!
GRRRRRRRR::my inner demon takes over::UPDATE SOOOON!!!
person tag
schedule February 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, you have a great story! I really hope do decide to continue soon. It’s very interesting and it sounded like it just reached the climax of the story. I really can’t wait for the next chapter, please update soon!
person Evil_Blue_Butterfly
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sorely tempted to find your address and come over to your house and force you to update this story. I know quite a few people who are very disapointed that you seemingly gave up on this story. However, you have a really good start on this story and I hope you will continue it. I would like to know what happens at the end. And no, you can't just email me and tell me. I want to read it with good descriptions.
Do you need ideas? I do have a few that I came up with right on the spot. I personally would like Kagome to get trained by someone. Preferably Genkai from Yu Yu Hakusho. It only has to be a slight crossover. Nothing much. You could always have Kagome stay for like a year in her time and have Genkai train her while Sango, Miroku, Kiara and Shippo look for Jewel shards. Sesshomaru could stew in hiw own hate and anger or whatever. Kagome comes back and Sesshomaru finds out she is only just a "wee bit stronger." ( Right, like a heck lot more stronger, she even has her self confidence back.) Just for the fun of it, you could make Sesshomaru end up with a subduing necklace. You are capable of coming up with a degrading enough word for him. You know how he detests being defied or overpowered right? Well, you could also use something like, "Down Dog." That would take him on a trip down doggy obedience lane. It's always fun to come up with something that makes him look like a total "dog" in this case.
Sayonara
-Evil_Blue_Butterfly
person INU-KAGLOVER
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi!! Just wanted to know if you were going to continue your flick or not! It's such a great story that it would be a shame to drop it after all of this. Hopefully, you're just taking a sabbatical from it right now. (That's what I'm doing with mine :P) Anywho, I hope you DO continue with your story. I know a couple of more people who are anxiously awaiting a new chapter... Thanks!
person Icykimi
schedule February 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just wanted to let you know that so far this is an awesome fic and I can't wait for you to keep going with it. Please e-mail me when you finally do update! I think my e-mail adress is listed, but if not: Ice_Goddess216@msn.com. Update soon!

---Icykimi
person kato
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hallo!!!?? When on earth will you update??? how long must i wait untill you decide do movr your ass and give us the next chapter, huh??? get a grip on yourself!!
by the way great strory!! :)
person vblum12
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
really great story! you have to update~
person richonyx
schedule October 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think this is a great story. Sesshomaru can be so...MEAN!!!! But I like it and I hope that you update soon!
person YoukaiNMe
schedule October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story..
I love the way you have done Sess..finally he's not mushy
Hope you will update!!
person Niji-neko
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!!!

Really interesting peace this story of yours!! Or just plain COOL!.

Poor Kagome she´s reallyong ong to be able to keep up with all that stuff, i´m onto the next chaps!!!

Please kep up with the great story!

Ja!