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for In too deep

by Pallas

person ptbear
schedule November 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting but sad. Update soon. Can't wait to read when Sesshomaru realizes his true feelings for Kagome and how Kagome reacts to them. What happens with Kikyou and Inuyasha and if Inu is under a spell.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person continue
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
comtinue
person Kai
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. You must keep adding more chapters! I'm beginning to love this odd pairing. I can't wait until your next chapters! Good work!
person Phoenix023
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! I love this story so far!! Please continue it! You've done a great job with the characters and the writing!
person Hatori
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heeeeey! I really love your story so far and hope you don't plan on stopping it there. I'd like... seriously go crazy if you did. I keep thinking about this story and like what I think is gonna happened next and I really can't concentrate on much else. I know that sounds stupid, but it's true. I'll be keeping my eyes open for an update. ^.^ Later!
person ariaqueen
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew what Sesshoumaru's instincts were aiming at the whole time! *looks smug* But then, that's only because I can predict things REALLY well. Anywho, this fic is fantabulous! You have got to update, or at least attempt to! If you honestly can't update, then you could you please post a short 'chapter' that says you are cancelling this fic? 'Cause it's really good, and I (for one) would like to see more.

Your descriptions are so good that you can actually feel the despair Kagome feels everytime Sesshoumaru harasses her, or the anger when she fights back. And your style is very unique, you even have a plot no one else ever thought of! So please, update if you can, or tell us if you can't.
person akumu
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very interesting story to far, and I'm hoping that you update again soon!
person The Lecturess
schedule March 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That is great! Keep updating pleeeeeease! ....... Will there be a lemon?
person DarkFire
schedule March 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww, this story is really great. You should try to update it.