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for The Red Hunger

by BellaJade

person Ami Yumi-chan
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oi, i don't update much but your an exception, cuz your fic rocks. Its the most interesting fanfic i've ever seen, and i've seen alot of SessKag fics. I wanted to be on your mailing list so i know when another chappie is out. Sesshoumaru's hot, and i love to see him and Kagome together *sigh*. They make such a cuuuute couple. I know i probably sound like one of those lovesick SessKag fans, but im not like that, seriously. So keep up the good work dude ^.-.
person Dragon_Lady
schedule November 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAAAAAAAAATE! Gah! I really hate you right now. After yet more problems with the Database, I come back and find what seems like an interesting story. I read through it, and besides some missing and messed up words here and there (perhaps also caused by the database problems? I don't know. It looks like the same thing is happening in the reviews, so it's probably either the DB, or careless spelling on the part of numerous people) I really loved what I read so far. I get to chapter 4, which was great except for one little problem... This:

"In a show of bravery, Miroku clasped his staff and pushed himself standing. With uncharacteristic calmness, and a hopefully diplomatic stance Miroku eyed the youkai before him, " Is Kagome O.K? "

At his question Sesshoumaru glanced down at the miko he was cradling to his chest. Miroku could have n /P>

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Sesshoumaru was staring into his bedrooms large fireplace, while reclining on a decadent set of overlarge black silk pillows. For lack of a better word, the Greater Lord of Japan was brooding. Why did I try to comfort her?"


Cut off. >_< Ugh. But, despite these slight problems, I really love you story. It was THEN I noticed that this story hasn't been updated since the end of March! >_< And left off on such a cliffhanger, too! After so long without updating, I'm not so confident there will be any more updates. (which ought to be a crime, since it's so good) So, come on now! Update this story! Or at least find someone who will update it. Don't leave us all hanging! ='(
person Mandy
schedule November 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARRRGG! What an evil place to stop!!! Horrible cliff hanger!!!! Please update soon! Don't MAKE me come after you! ;)
person Ymanetta
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohh my goodness you have to update your story. Girl its been forever Please Please Please add me to your email list when you update your story Thanks
~Ymanetta@hotmail.com~
person Youkainme
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh I so hope you are going to update this..
This is a really good story..
person chryssa
schedule September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aiyah! been looking for your story for quite sometime now! when the neck are you going to load the next chapter?! im so excited on what i am going to read up next... with kagome having... aiyah! as you said... or made sessho-san say, the possibilities are endless, especially now that it seems that both of them are getting to know each other... lol! so please load the story up already! it's been 4 months already! niways love your story! keep it up!
person Quinn
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I read the fist three chapters on Single Spark and came here to see if you had more, and, YES!, you did.
I love your story! The interaction between Kagome and Sesshoumoru is pricelees, the humor's great, and the over-all plot is very kinky--and origanal.
But , I wonder, it seems you already have quite a few chapters written, have you decided not to continue posting? If so then I will have to resorte to praying/begging you to post all you have.....or at least one insy winsy chapter?? Please?

I seem to be celebrating my 17th birthday by readind NC-17 rated stories..get it? Now I don't feel guilty anymore. ....I'm a wierd little child.

Please update as soon as you can, it's been over five months.
person Si-san
schedule September 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to tell how how much I love your story. I started reading it quite a while ago (nearly a year now) and always waited impatiently for the next chapter to arrive. I followed you here from fanfiction.net, and I check regularly for more updates (not having the luxury of the author alert here). I've been so sad to see no updates for many months, and I hope you are well and haven't dropped the story. It's far too good a story and you are far too talented an authoress to end it now. From me to you, deepest compliments and greatest hopes that you will keep writing.

Si-san

(you mentioned something about an alert mailing system, and I would be forever grateful if you could add me to the list. My email is moonookami02@hotmail.com . Feel free to just write for a chat, too, if you wish. I love getting emails ^__^)
person shabopo
schedule August 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I stumbled across this story and found it excessively interesting, not to mention a cut above the drivel alot of kag/sess stories turn out to be. It'd be lovely if you could e-mail me when you update. I believe your story on ff.net is the most updated, to date.
~Shabopo
person Kagome
schedule August 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i real like this put can you pick up the pace i now you have work and all but trie plz.
Kagome youkai higurashi