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for Sango's little fling

by liberatedmysterygirl

person Hentai Master
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow Im reviewing Im reviewing
person blulily07
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS STORY please keep me updated if u have an updaters list or something of the sort but otherwise jst please please please continue to write thiory!ory!!! you're very good at this kind of thing!!
<(^_^)>
person Adonis
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes please continue do not stop i realy enjoyed it
person Anna
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...I want to see Kagome and Inuyasha go at it first and then when they start round 2 Sango walks in on them. Which will obviously lead to a threesome between them. ^_^
person Foxy Minx
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, ya wanna review, I'll send ya a review! lol First of all, yes! great job at putting flaggey, or whoever the hell it is in her place. I mean, shes not the one who was writing the story, doi. Also, for you story, its soooooo steamy, makes ya just wanna get some....(o_o) okay, that was uncalled for. anyways, whatever review you get, you should'nt listen. they probably don't know what they are talking about anyway. Great story, and I hope you will get enough reviews to continue! F.M.
person KagoKitty
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh sweetie...you don't have to beg for me to review...but nice of you to do so!! lol...fuck flaggey, man...this is an ADULT fanfiction site and he most definately does not get the picture. Next time send your flame to me and I'll just prepare to kick some cyber ass. I'm not afriad to, either. Keep writing...come on, you know you want to...
toodles,
=^-.~^=
person nightfall2525
schedule March 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok that was good, what will you have going on next. Are Kagome and Inuyasha in her time or the past? I can tell you where on a suger high your spelling was off. So what next Naraku and Sango or will you have Sesshomaru come back for Sango? I know have them getting in to a fite with Sesshomaru and have him go after Sango and not fite Inuyasha.
person Hollychan
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Maybe Flaggey's words were a bit offensive, but you are being FAR worse by attacking him. By posting a story, you made yourself open to receiving such comments, so don't act so shocked that someone decided to let you know they don't enjoy your story.

And you said it yourself-- you take about 5 minutes to write and post this stuff. For 5 minutes, were you really expecting it to be all that great?! Even if you don't have a beta, that still doesn't mean you cannot use a spell check. I'd sug spe spending a bit more time on your writing, and then repost. You'll get better results. -_-;;

Ja ne,
Holly~chan
person ANIME123
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey i read your story it was great! ^-^ sry about that flaggey or whatever it was but it was proply just some ass going around writing bad reviews to everyone! there proply 12 lol i hope you would continue not continuing is what flaggey wants so dont give that ass what they want!
person Flaggey Is Gay
schedule February 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Dont stop writing b/c of that guy. You will be giving him what he wants. I was looking forward to that sango/kag/inu scene too :::cries:::