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for Pool of Fantasy

by euphoricskies

person KagoKitty
schedule February 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHAHAHAHA!!
oh child...this is so funnee!! I know you're most likely being serious with this so here we go...you can possible make this a romantic (naughty) comedy...but if you want people to become more serious about your writing, you need to be a little less blunt with words.
needless to say...that first chapter kinda' brightened my day, hon!!
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