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for Swimsuit Shopping

by Emy

person Anon
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Stephanie
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you do continue this. It's great so far. The relationship between the two is great it's a nice mix/change from other fics that i've read. Well done mate! Hope to read more of you talented works.

Stephanie
person Anon
schedule December 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
there is a problem with the chap. it only shows half of the story!please, divide the story in two chaps!thanks!
person Sorena
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was a wonderful one-piece! It was so cute and the idea of the swimsuits was amusing. Keep up the great work!
person Hillary
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow this is soooo good make more chapters
person KiKi
schedule March 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like continue
person KagoKitty
schedule February 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
CUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTE!!
=^= K^=
person Draco
schedule February 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'd love to see how this story continues. A vacation those two take would be hilarious as well as sexy. If Miroku and Sango also showed up i could imagine the fun they would all have.
person angelkitty77
schedule February 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i just read both of your stories and I LOVE THEM KEEP WRITING. your lemons are great. and the stories have a semi plot to them
person huntress
schedule February 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was funny and a really good lemon. great job i hope you write another one soon!!!! =^.^=